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Senryu #9 ...Hot Shower...
one of man's greatest inventions
right up there...but just ahead...
of sliced bread.
right up there...but just ahead...
of sliced bread.
Published 2nd Dec 2018
| Edited 8th Dec 2018
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2nd Dec 2018 1:47pm
Neat Senryu.
It's a close-run contest for sure - but I agree with you.
However, electric heater-blanket pre-warming the bed in a freezing bedroom might push sliced bread into 3rd place.
It's a close-run contest for sure - but I agree with you.
However, electric heater-blanket pre-warming the bed in a freezing bedroom might push sliced bread into 3rd place.
2nd Dec 2018 10:34pm
Ah...yes, I must admit
that my little pad for 'lectric heat
is hard to beat... for instant comfort...
works equally well...for a sprung back
or a sudden chill...
that my little pad for 'lectric heat
is hard to beat... for instant comfort...
works equally well...for a sprung back
or a sudden chill...
