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Trick
Her name of no real import
Some alias, much like "Gigi"
I was floored by her allure
Another trick with modest bucks
Her seduction a complete success
A private dance without much sound
A smirk, no smile, as I grew hard
And that mouth simply did its job
Only one more trick of her trade
One more addition to her book
I felt my lack of instant charm
As she left with a guarded look.
Some alias, much like "Gigi"
I was floored by her allure
Another trick with modest bucks
Her seduction a complete success
A private dance without much sound
A smirk, no smile, as I grew hard
And that mouth simply did its job
Only one more trick of her trade
One more addition to her book
I felt my lack of instant charm
As she left with a guarded look.
Published 26th Nov 2018
Author's Note
Based on a personal encounter with a pro.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Anonymous
26th Nov 2018 11:17pm
I know that feeling. For them you are just a client that wants to buy their merchandise. For you a release. But the problem is that it's so empty. But when you need it, you need it. Good write my friend. You brought back memories. J
26th Nov 2018 11:22pm
26th Nov 2018 11:33pm
My friend, this is such an accurate expression of how it really is. You need as only a man needs, acquiring the ‘service’ ( I wouldn’t even call it ‘merchandise’ because there’s nothing tangible to show after for the money spent ).
Your brief encounter, via a mere three stanzas, touches all points & hits the climax with that cold indifferent punch.
Raw & real, with nothing that gets in the way ...a solid write, Thomas.
Jadey x
Your brief encounter, via a mere three stanzas, touches all points & hits the climax with that cold indifferent punch.
Raw & real, with nothing that gets in the way ...a solid write, Thomas.
Jadey x
26th Nov 2018 11:49pm
Thank you for the thoughtful comment, Jadey. I do try. It was quite an experience. I just wish it was favorable.
26th Nov 2018 11:37pm
28th Nov 2018 00:21am
27th Nov 2018 9:21am
I've never paid for sex, but can only imagine it as a cold transaction. I've always found sex is only worth doing if both parties are enjoying it.
Thank you for sharing your experience.
Thank you for sharing your experience.
28th Nov 2018 00:23am
I paid out of desperation. Still, there should be at least a tad of romance involved for full satisfaction. Thanks Rjm!
27th Nov 2018 10:32am
28th Nov 2018 00:24am
27th Nov 2018 3:02pm
I love that you unabashedly write from real life. It connects the reader to your humanity, and I don’t know what is more raw than that.
28th Nov 2018 00:27am
Most of my stuff is meant as entertainmen but I try for substance once in a while. Thank you Eerie!
27th Nov 2018 3:09pm
dearest Sir Crow
this kind of turned me on
I don't why...
it's a thug life...
great write...
love Brenda ❤
this kind of turned me on
I don't why...
it's a thug life...
great write...
love Brenda ❤
28th Nov 2018 11:41am
