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Lost Boy
in a strange land
on fine white sand
I see you
walking in Perdido
Blue Angels above
trailing their love
I see you
dreaming in Perdido
scaling war forts
in bermuda shorts
I see you
climbing Perdido
Faulkner
words blur
I hear you
breathing Perdido
outside my window
winter’s first snow
I feel you
touch Perdido
I see you
drinking in Perdido
I know
your shadow
on fine white sand
I see you
walking in Perdido
Blue Angels above
trailing their love
I see you
dreaming in Perdido
scaling war forts
in bermuda shorts
I see you
climbing Perdido
Faulkner
words blur
I hear you
breathing Perdido
outside my window
winter’s first snow
I feel you
touch Perdido
I see you
drinking in Perdido
I know
your shadow
Published 19th Nov 2018
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19th Nov 2018 5:24pm
When my father was deployed, my mother sent him tape recordings of her voice. These are the kinds of things I would hear her say. . . when she thought me asleep.
Absence does one of two things: extinquishes the weak or enflames the strong. Love knows not its own until the hour of separation. 🔥
Lovely poem. I particularly enjoyed the repeated references to Perdido. 📝
Absence does one of two things: extinquishes the weak or enflames the strong. Love knows not its own until the hour of separation. 🔥
Lovely poem. I particularly enjoyed the repeated references to Perdido. 📝
20th Nov 2018 9:51pm
That’s so sweet your mother did that. Both my parents served and I remember dad only being able to call us once a month on deployment (if we were lucky) for five minutes. Luckily the technology is better now.
Yes, I thought too since perdido means “lost” in Spanish it’s a little extra for the poem :-)
Yes, I thought too since perdido means “lost” in Spanish it’s a little extra for the poem :-)
