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Dark Side
Written by
LunasChild8
Published 18th Nov 2018
Author's Note
Written for the "Show me your dark side Visual Poetry Competition"
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Re. Dark Side
18th Nov 2018 3:42pm
this is awesome... I love the expression on her face...
wooww..! this is what I was expecting. thank you for submitting fo the competition
wooww..! this is what I was expecting. thank you for submitting fo the competition
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Re: Re. Dark Side
18th Nov 2018 3:53pm
Thanks for your comment and for hosting the competition, dejure. I'm glad you like my entry.
Re. Dark Side
18th Nov 2018 5:06pm
Re: Re. Dark Side
1st Jan 2019 4:34pm
Hello Josh. Happy New Year! I'd appreciate if you'd vote for my poem in the "Show Me Your Dark Side" competition.
Re. Dark Side
19th Nov 2018 1:57am
Best wishes, Luna. That first line said it all. I often wonder if that's the way to avoid darkness, then Again, the next line assures me that I can't give up my love and sweetness!
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Re: Re. Dark Side
19th Nov 2018 2:01am
Thank you for your comment, Pandora. The world could definitely use more love in it.
Re: Re. Dark Side
1st Jan 2019 4:34pm
Hello Pandora. Happy New Year! I'd appreciate if you'd vote for my poem in the "Show Me Your Dark Side" competition.
Re: Re. Dark Side
3rd Jan 2019 5:35am
Oh my. I'm not sure if I caught this in time. I don't think I was around and SO need to get more involved in the community! Sorry if I missed it as you always have my support!!
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3rd Jan 2019 8:05pm
Re: Re. Dark Side
14th Jan 2019 00:37am
Woo hooo. Congrats Luna. I've been away awhile here at the beginning, but I've made it a resolution to be more actively involved with my treasured peeps. *big hugs*
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Re. Dark Side
Anonymous
24th Nov 2018 6:36am
Woah. And wait is that Raven in TT? She's my happy pill. 💛 Good luck with the competition!
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Re: Re. Dark Side
24th Nov 2018 12:56pm
Yep, it's Raven. She's my favorite character from Teen Titans.
Thanks for your kind words. Good luck to you as well.
Thanks for your kind words. Good luck to you as well.
Re. Dark Side
5th Dec 2018 10:25pm
Raven is my Favorite character from teen titans.... She definitely would speak your piece just the way you wrote it...…. she's full of sarcasm and self loathing.... in my opinion she makes a great demon....
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Re: Re. Dark Side
5th Dec 2018 10:28pm
Raven's my favorite Teen Titans character as well. She is a half-demon, although her soul is actually pure.
Re: Re. Dark Side
5th Dec 2018 10:50pm
yeah I know.... her father is hell bent on her fulfilling her prophecy..
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Re: Re. Dark Side
1st Jan 2019 4:34pm
Hi again, Joe. I'd appreciate if you'd also vote for this poem in the "Show Me Your Dark Side" competition.