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Our Time.......is running out! (sequel to ~ Drunkend Emotions)
Dear Lord here I am again
staring at this keyboard
with scattered thoughts
of whatever will come next
from tapping fingers
and a wreck less mind
sleepless night of wonder
how can it be I’m such a fool
to not see my self made demise
listening to tic-tock tic-tock
as time ticks away so does life
realizing day light soon will be here
mirror of my soul I soon look upon
bloodshot swollen green eyes
looking sadly tired back at me
mind gawking “should’ve let her sleep”but NO!
soul wouldn’t settle for that
had to get up to write thoughts down
why do words invade my sleep
or is this what makes poetry so real
each thought breathes a new line
every beautiful dream recorded
going from mind to purple ink
yes yes.....what a wonderful gift
sober or after a few glasses of wine
clock ticks away years of pain
start of another each day......
OUR TIME......is running out!
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
staring at this keyboard
with scattered thoughts
of whatever will come next
from tapping fingers
and a wreck less mind
sleepless night of wonder
how can it be I’m such a fool
to not see my self made demise
listening to tic-tock tic-tock
as time ticks away so does life
realizing day light soon will be here
mirror of my soul I soon look upon
bloodshot swollen green eyes
looking sadly tired back at me
mind gawking “should’ve let her sleep”but NO!
soul wouldn’t settle for that
had to get up to write thoughts down
why do words invade my sleep
or is this what makes poetry so real
each thought breathes a new line
every beautiful dream recorded
going from mind to purple ink
yes yes.....what a wonderful gift
sober or after a few glasses of wine
clock ticks away years of pain
start of another each day......
OUR TIME......is running out!
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 18th Nov 2018
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- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
18th Nov 2018 4:46am
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18th Nov 2018 4:51am
Hey Bender.......thank you for the poetic response.....luv it! I’m glad you enjoyed this my friend.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
18th Nov 2018 5:58am
Such somber triplets...future wonderings...a toast in a verse
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
22nd Nov 2018 2:10am
Hey Jeff.....always a delight to see your smile upon my ink......thank you for your thought provoking words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
18th Nov 2018 6:54am
Purple Flower,
You can't be sad, you're the nicest person in the world! You should always be happy.
Your poem is beautiful, however, as always! You're a wonderful writer(and person).
Love,
Matthew.
You can't be sad, you're the nicest person in the world! You should always be happy.
Your poem is beautiful, however, as always! You're a wonderful writer(and person).
Love,
Matthew.
22nd Nov 2018 2:12am
Hey Matt......I’m always so happy to see you upon my page.......you’re always so encouraging........so graciously supportive......thank you my friend.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
18th Nov 2018 4:36pm
Time waits for no man is exactky what I thought about when reading this one, flowergirl. . .yet, when we live as we live, there are times it seems it's contrasted with it will never end and will it ever end.
Here's hoping your nights become more bearable. ❤
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Here's hoping your nights become more bearable. ❤
I'm offering to mail free Christmas cards and postcards to all who want them this year! 🎄📬
22nd Nov 2018 2:15am
Hey Ahavati.......what great thoughts you’ve added upon my ink.......luv it when an ink gets different view points......makes me think deeper upon my words......thank you my friend. Do you make the cards yourself. Purple luv & hugs xo :)
I take your poem as a good sign - writing it down instead of thinking "I can't be bothered"
{ Time - that most amazing of all illusions (according to some ancient sages whose names I forget) :)) }
{ Time - that most amazing of all illusions (according to some ancient sages whose names I forget) :)) }
22nd Nov 2018 2:26am
Hey Josh......you are very wise my friend.......luv your response.......I have learned they out the years to get up and write the words out......otherwise they stay in my thoughts over and over thru the night.....when I finally get to sleep it’s hours later........in the morning I try to write and the meaning or inspiration are not the same......so to capture and keep the true emotion I write it right then.....,thank you......time is definedly a wonder to me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
18th Nov 2018 9:56pm
Despite the lack of sleep you press on. I hate to see you struggle, but the lines are magnificent. You deserve a glass of wine, but all things in moderation, yes? Love this sequel and the original poem. Rest easy sweet Flower.
22nd Nov 2018 2:29am
Hey Crow........it’s something I struggle with now and then......but I get thru it......writing helps me get past the moment in time......moments of thoughts......thank you for always feeling my words........purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
19th Nov 2018 11:30am
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22nd Nov 2018 2:31am
Hey Orenda........I’m glad you enjoyed this.......thank you for graciously smiling upon my ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
24th Nov 2018 4:22am
Our time certainly is running out. You must feel like a zombie sometimes. I didn't know your eyes were green. ;-)
24th Nov 2018 4:30am
Hey Billy.......yes sometimes I do feel like a zombie........sometimes the words won’t leave me till I get up and write my thoughts.......thank you for your kindness. Yes my eyes are green......they also give my thoughts away......LOL! Thanks again for taking time for me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
