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Lasting Impression
The seas went calm that day
as your lips embraced my soul
sunset downed a blushing red
igniting impressions we could hold
stars lit up and shot across
a never ending sky
a stolen look caught deep inside
where truths can never lie
I grazed your hair and took you in
these ever loving eyes
my heart aroused, my breaths be still
as beauty graced my side
night it filled with passions
no less than one could yearn
awoken upon the seashore
where endless embers burn
as your lips embraced my soul
sunset downed a blushing red
igniting impressions we could hold
stars lit up and shot across
a never ending sky
a stolen look caught deep inside
where truths can never lie
I grazed your hair and took you in
these ever loving eyes
my heart aroused, my breaths be still
as beauty graced my side
night it filled with passions
no less than one could yearn
awoken upon the seashore
where endless embers burn
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Re. Lasting Impression
15th Nov 2018 2:54pm
damn it Tim this is romantically beautiful
with impeccable rhythm, you delivered this tender beauty...
love Brenda 💕
with impeccable rhythm, you delivered this tender beauty...
love Brenda 💕
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15th Nov 2018 3:45pm
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Anonymous
15th Nov 2018 3:09pm
You have definitely got a soft, romantic hue to you, Tim. Lovely rhythm and lovely sentiments.
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Re: Re. Lasting Impression
15th Nov 2018 3:46pm
Thank you dearest Willow. Have to think warm thoughts as the snow has descended upon on my doorstep
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Anonymous
15th Nov 2018 7:41pm
Tim, Tim, Tim,
That was awesome, and romantic and all. Really great,
but depression! That's where it's at my man!!
The women really dig the depressing stuff...oh...wait...why are all
these women commenting??!! Why do I get 3 guys only!!!
Damn!! LOL.
Great writing my friend.
White flag!
Matthew.
That was awesome, and romantic and all. Really great,
but depression! That's where it's at my man!!
The women really dig the depressing stuff...oh...wait...why are all
these women commenting??!! Why do I get 3 guys only!!!
Damn!! LOL.
Great writing my friend.
White flag!
Matthew.
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15th Nov 2018 9:25pm
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Re. Lasting Impression
16th Nov 2018 00:19am
Love the imagery to this. That last stanza particularly shines. And yes, this will leave a lasting impression. On me.
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16th Nov 2018 3:52am
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16th Nov 2018 12:37pm
Re. Lasting Impression
23rd Nov 2018 3:27am
I love the seashore, such a pretty poem, love the last lines and mystery..
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23rd Nov 2018 3:52am