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What He Seems
He still seems somewhat self contained
His demons may be at bay for now
But they yet show up in his eyes
And in deep furrows of his brow
His conscience gathering in force
Remembrance of days in the dark
The imps that plague him in the night
Just may concede the needed spark
He tries to put it on the page
Hesitant with every word
They just don't have the needed strength
And end up reaching the absurd
He still gives it another go
Lets his imagination feed
Catharsis at the midnight feast
And his demons will pay him heed.
His demons may be at bay for now
But they yet show up in his eyes
And in deep furrows of his brow
His conscience gathering in force
Remembrance of days in the dark
The imps that plague him in the night
Just may concede the needed spark
He tries to put it on the page
Hesitant with every word
They just don't have the needed strength
And end up reaching the absurd
He still gives it another go
Lets his imagination feed
Catharsis at the midnight feast
And his demons will pay him heed.
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Re. What He Seems
Anonymous
15th Nov 2018 00:50am
You are in a dark mood, my friend, lately. I feel pain and regret. Life is an enduring struggle and, being we are not getting any younger, I feel this darkness and regret myself. Beautifully presented my friend. J
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Re: Re. What He Seems
15th Nov 2018 00:55am
You're right, J. I am in a dark mood but trying to make the most of things. It's time to shake the blues. Thank you J.
Re. What He Seems
Anonymous
15th Nov 2018 2:41am
Hey Crow.......my demons must have found me.......I was writing my response and my iPad went blink......creeepy! Very dark reflection of looking deep within your soul.......I propmise though.......only you see your darkness.....the rest of us see your grace and wisdom......keep the darkness.......it will go away.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. What He Seems
16th Nov 2018 1:34am
Your comment brightens my day, Flower. Thank you for the kindness, and reassuring words. Luv you!
Re. What He Seems
15th Nov 2018 7:53am
Re: Re. What He Seems
16th Nov 2018 1:36am
We can't escape the past, only minimize the damage incurred, and not repeat the screw ups. Thank you Rjm!
Re. What He Seems
15th Nov 2018 10:34am
dearest Sir Crow love this dark revelation
it speaks to the demon in me...
love Brenda 😈
it speaks to the demon in me...
love Brenda 😈
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Re: Re. What He Seems
16th Nov 2018 1:37am
Re. What He Seems
15th Nov 2018 1:16pm
Deep dark piece i dig it👏
"He still seems somewhat self contained
His demons may be at bay for now
But they yet show up in his eyes
And in deep furrows of his brow"
Great lines so so relatable✌
"He still seems somewhat self contained
His demons may be at bay for now
But they yet show up in his eyes
And in deep furrows of his brow"
Great lines so so relatable✌
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Re: Re. What He Seems
16th Nov 2018 1:38am
Re. What He Seems
15th Nov 2018 5:05pm
When I'm in a dark mood, Crowfly, I watch this (my favourite jazz/stride pianist):
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=75mXnFzwsQI
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=75mXnFzwsQI
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Re: Re. What He Seems
16th Nov 2018 1:39am
Re. What He Seems
15th Nov 2018 11:41pm
Another great rhyming flow ... I remain ... envious ... bravo crowfly ...
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Re: Re. What He Seems
16th Nov 2018 1:41am
Just can't seem to resist the rhyme. I envy you and others who are not fixated on it, and can write with power without such devices. Thank you LilDragonFly.