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summer's kiss
the lilting sun sang of summertime
when in full array
the flowers in tune
did dance for their God
now sleepy in the garden
his warming rays too far away to wake them
they one by one closed their petals
and prepare for winter's Odyssey
as frost took over the land
all nature protested the end to summer's gayety
alas with a kiss and a promise
the sun sank behind the horizon
to rise again the following season
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Re. summer's kiss
13th Nov 2018 4:11pm
Re: Re. summer's kiss
13th Nov 2018 4:13pm
thank you beautiful Nari just something stuck in my head this cold winter's morning... you know how our muses are lol...
I'm happy you liked this one...
love Brenda 🌹
I'm happy you liked this one...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. summer's kiss
13th Nov 2018 6:16pm
"alas with a kiss and a promise
the sun sank behind the horizon
to rise again the following season"
Very beautiful Crims...
I love it
Jeff
the sun sank behind the horizon
to rise again the following season"
Very beautiful Crims...
I love it
Jeff
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Re: Re. summer's kiss
14th Nov 2018 12:05pm
thank you graciously dearest Jeff for the love on this different kind of write for me...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. summer's kiss
13th Nov 2018 6:42pm
Great write. There is beauty in winter but you certainly made me long for summer again.
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Re: Re. summer's kiss
14th Nov 2018 12:06pm
thank you graciously dearest RJM I think I was just cold today lol...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. summer's kiss
Anonymous
13th Nov 2018 6:57pm
Crimmy!!
That is so beautiful, my friend(what else would I expect coming from you!), but it's a little bit of a departure from you, simpler, and natural, but just beautiful.
Thank you, my friend!
Matthew.
That is so beautiful, my friend(what else would I expect coming from you!), but it's a little bit of a departure from you, simpler, and natural, but just beautiful.
Thank you, my friend!
Matthew.
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Re: Re. summer's kiss
14th Nov 2018 12:07pm
thank you graciously dearest Matthew I love when you visit me... I know this one is different just something that was kind of stuck in my head...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. summer's kiss
Anonymous
14th Nov 2018 3:27pm
I told you I want to live inside that head! It's got so much beauty!
What was the rent?? LOL.
Love you, Crimmy!
Matthew.
What was the rent?? LOL.
Love you, Crimmy!
Matthew.
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Re. summer's kiss
13th Nov 2018 7:07pm
Beautiful penning poet👏 lovely imagery which took me to a peaceful place✌
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Re: Re. summer's kiss
14th Nov 2018 12:08pm
thank you graciously dearest Hunter so happy this took you to a tranquil place...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Re: Re. summer's kiss
14th Nov 2018 12:08pm
thank you graciously dearest Tim I'm so happy this spoke to you...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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Re: Re. summer's kiss
14th Nov 2018 12:09pm
Re. summer's kiss
Anonymous
13th Nov 2018 7:56pm
Did you know, my sweet one, that the 25 of December is the day the Romans had chosen for the solemnity of the Sol Invictus, literally the feast of the invincible sun. This to mark the power of rebirth of the almighty sun during the beginning of winter? Beautiful write, sweet one. I love celebrating the other festivity of spring or equinox. Winter just runs my soul down. Hugs and love. J
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Re: Re. summer's kiss
14th Nov 2018 12:11pm
thank you graciously dearest Juvenalis for sharing your knowledge with me...you always gift me with what you know and I cherish your wisdom... I find it beautifully appropriate to this poem the Sol Invictus...
I deeply appreciate you...
love & hugs...
Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate you...
love & hugs...
Brenda 💕
Re. summer's kiss
13th Nov 2018 9:15pm
A gentle and truly lovely write, Brenda. "To rise again the following season." Nature will shake off the frost and things will flourish once again. I still dread the coming cold...
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Re: Re. summer's kiss
14th Nov 2018 12:12pm
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow yeah me too my friend I'm a child of summer...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. summer's kiss
14th Nov 2018 12:08pm
Summer was like a dream. Beautiful write Crim.
I don't mind the frost.
Dark Sun.
I don't mind the frost.
Dark Sun.
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Re: Re. summer's kiss
14th Nov 2018 12:13pm
thank you dearest Dark Sun I love when you visit me sigh yeah giggles I was just cold when I wrote this plenty of beauty to behold in winter...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. summer's kiss
14th Nov 2018 12:13pm
Re: Re. summer's kiss
14th Nov 2018 12:16pm
thank you dearest Tim sigh the sun will return to us in all his glory and bring warmer days... until then sunflowers will be blooming in my mind...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹