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Forever
Earth; mountain, forest, sky above
Sea and lake, shining silver river
I give what I have, most of all my love
Undying, unrepentant and forever
Sea and lake, shining silver river
I give what I have, most of all my love
Undying, unrepentant and forever
Published 12th Nov 2018
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12th Nov 2018 3:14pm
Really like the structure of this ... it has a great flow and cadence to it ...
12th Nov 2018 3:16pm
12th Nov 2018 10:06pm
13th Nov 2018 6:29pm
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Jan 2019 12:45pm
12th Nov 2018 11:08pm
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13th Nov 2018 6:31pm
Thanks HJ. I was hoping for average rather than just short but it is what it is.
13th Nov 2018 11:02am
13th Nov 2018 6:32pm
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Dec 2018 2:45am
5th Dec 2018 11:00pm
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