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Darkly
you'll feel me in the darkness
as I slither in your home
do you know me Darkly
do you really know me yet?
I am the huntress who stalks your steps
wetted mouth
licking my lips
hungry for cock
I'll drink you dry from the inside
then spit the seed
you used to deliver
I inhale the stars
hallucinogens causing me to see visions
I see a vast prism
created from my words
your prison
crimson lust stirring a love spell
you will twist for me
burn for me
yes Darkly I turn the screws
you'll see
I'll get inside your mind
break things down for you
yes I'm the brazen one
the one you failed to see
when you stepped to me
Published 8th Nov 2018
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8th Nov 2018 2:10pm
8th Nov 2018 2:19pm
8th Nov 2018 2:16pm
I inhale the stars...you always inspire me Crim.
This reminded me of an LSD trip I once had.
This reminded me of an LSD trip I once had.
8th Nov 2018 2:20pm
Anonymous
8th Nov 2018 2:23pm
A bit of fierce fire in the strut this morning, my beautiful Dark Angel. Darkly delicious...
I love you...
...ever your Willow
I love you...
...ever your Willow
8th Nov 2018 2:24pm
thank you beautiful Willow you always get me...
I love you lovely one...
love Brenda ❤
I love you lovely one...
love Brenda ❤
Anonymous
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8th Nov 2018 2:28pm
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8th Nov 2018 2:31pm
thank you dearest Tim for sharing your thoughts on this write... you're deeply appreciated...
pleasure and pain I like that...
love Brenda 🌹
pleasure and pain I like that...
love Brenda 🌹
8th Nov 2018 3:10pm
Great title with this ... wonderful flow and cadence ... peppered with luscious plump words that tickle the ear ... bravo my poetess ...
8th Nov 2018 8:44pm
thank you graciously beautiful Dragonfly for such a wonderful comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
8th Nov 2018 8:45pm
8th Nov 2018 8:51pm
I can't help thinking of a succubus when I read this. Fascinating lines, Brenda, full of mystery and inspiration.
8th Nov 2018 9:15pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow giggles I love your vision of this write...
love Brenda 😈
love Brenda 😈
9th Nov 2018 1:07am
9th Nov 2018 3:39pm
9th Nov 2018 3:56am
Awesome ink, Lady Darkly Crim. You do tempt us so with your blackened quill.
9th Nov 2018 3:40pm
11th Nov 2018 2:27pm
Love the poem and the picture suits it well although she does not swallow damn lol. Another addition to my reading list
11th Nov 2018 2:29pm
thank you graciously dearest Stan giggles you gifted me smiles today...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
11th Nov 2018 2:30pm
