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rotten strawberries
I murdered the rust growing on my brain
it was parked at a green light
running from the cops at top speed going nowhere
a beer run gone bad
I heard on the loudspeaker hands up
raised um quick got caught holding a loaf of bread
freed green peace beatniks
protesting my womanhood
said something just didn't jive
ladylike manners never had any
tie-dyed emotions spoke against me
the judge said my hair was out of order
all the while menopause threatened to rat me out
as being older than twenty
life on the run can age you
I ran from a toaster who was giving me lip
he and my quick-triggered rage caught up quick
now I'm doing twenty without
in a madhouse full of poets
writing out my thoughts on toilet paper
with ink that smells of strawberries
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1st Nov 2018 8:42pm
thank you dearest Bender for digging this one sometimes I just let my crazy mind talk lol...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
1st Nov 2018 8:37pm
Very very ironic dear Brenda. I like this write. Powerful example of a person who has come out victorious from life's war. Excellent my dear friend. J
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Anonymous
1st Nov 2018 8:54pm
Crimmy!
You are awesome, my friend!!
I loved that!
'The judge said my hair was out of order'!! That cracked me up!
Love you, Crimmy,
Matthew.
You are awesome, my friend!!
I loved that!
'The judge said my hair was out of order'!! That cracked me up!
Love you, Crimmy,
Matthew.
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1st Nov 2018 8:57pm
giggles thank you dearest Matthew I'm happy to brought you smiles today 😊
as you do me always...
love Brenda 🌹
as you do me always...
love Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
1st Nov 2018 8:59pm
I happened to smile when I read that response, too.
You're a bright light, young lady!
(I don't know how you make those heart things, but imagine some here),
Matthew.
You're a bright light, young lady!
(I don't know how you make those heart things, but imagine some here),
Matthew.
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1st Nov 2018 9:40pm
Come on Brenda,
tie-dyed emotions spoke against me
the judge said my hair was out of order
all the while menopause threatened to rat me out
as being older than twenty
life on the run can age you
Fire.
tie-dyed emotions spoke against me
the judge said my hair was out of order
all the while menopause threatened to rat me out
as being older than twenty
life on the run can age you
Fire.
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1st Nov 2018 10:15pm
thank you graciously beautiful Nari no doubt my hard life shows...
I deeply appreciate you lovely lady💕
love Brenda
I deeply appreciate you lovely lady💕
love Brenda
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Anonymous
2nd Nov 2018 12:58pm
There is a whole lot going on in this one, my beautiful Dark Angel. It catches the attention and then sits there, waiting to be recognized. I love this one! :-)
I love you...
...ever your Willow
I love you...
...ever your Willow
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3rd Nov 2018 3:26pm
thank you beautiful Willow for going on this crazy trip with me lol...
I love you...
love Brenda 💕
I love you...
love Brenda 💕
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2nd Nov 2018 8:15pm
"A beer run gone bad" but poetry done right. This has kind of a psychedelic feel to me. Something about that toaster. Love this!
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3rd Nov 2018 3:27pm
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow for feeling my vibe here...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤