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Under Construction
We're all a work in progress,
and it's a long ass process,
from your very first breath,
to the day of your death,
we all may suffer,
the world might buffer,
but we're all under construction,
the world is full of destruction,
it's a process,
we're making progress,
slowly,
but surely,
we'll make mistakes,
our bodies will ache,
we'll learn to love,
who knows if there's even a world above,
we're all under construction,
and the process is hard,
but I know you'l make it far.
and it's a long ass process,
from your very first breath,
to the day of your death,
we all may suffer,
the world might buffer,
but we're all under construction,
the world is full of destruction,
it's a process,
we're making progress,
slowly,
but surely,
we'll make mistakes,
our bodies will ache,
we'll learn to love,
who knows if there's even a world above,
we're all under construction,
and the process is hard,
but I know you'l make it far.
Published 30th Oct 2018
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6th Nov 2018 00:59am
Nicely done , overall , Jem Stoned...
The rhyme is good , the best being the first four lines :
"We're all a work in progress,
and it's a long ass process,
from your very first breath,
to the day of your death"
Keep at it !
The rhyme is good , the best being the first four lines :
"We're all a work in progress,
and it's a long ass process,
from your very first breath,
to the day of your death"
Keep at it !
7th Nov 2018 7:52pm
