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Illuminate the Path
Stripped down
Peeling off human layers
Identity revealed
Not so easy a process
Lightbulb moment
Opening up like a flower
Nobody needs to be saved
Going forward
Seeing with light
No religion
Not spiritual
Taking what's given
Its not gratitude
More of human grace
No paintings to illustrate
Back to plain words
As in the beginning
Blank canvas
Then the miraculous
Peeling off human layers
Identity revealed
Not so easy a process
Lightbulb moment
Opening up like a flower
Nobody needs to be saved
Going forward
Seeing with light
No religion
Not spiritual
Taking what's given
Its not gratitude
More of human grace
No paintings to illustrate
Back to plain words
As in the beginning
Blank canvas
Then the miraculous
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Re. Illuminate the Path
23rd Oct 2018 12:08pm
This was so peaceful to read. A state of grace we should all aspire too.
Wonderful work PS
Wonderful work PS
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23rd Oct 2018 12:13pm
Re. Illuminate the Path
23rd Oct 2018 12:17pm
A beautiful epiphany, of sorts?
Freeing words, Poet.
This feels honest and bare. Lovely.
Freeing words, Poet.
This feels honest and bare. Lovely.
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Re: Re. Illuminate the Path
23rd Oct 2018 12:32pm
Yes, definitely an epiphany
Had been struggling and didn't know why
I do now
Thank you
Had been struggling and didn't know why
I do now
Thank you
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23rd Oct 2018 2:48pm
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Re. Illuminate the Path
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2018 4:34pm
Back to the roots...and see how it grows. I like it
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23rd Oct 2018 4:52pm
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Anonymous
23rd Oct 2018 5:17pm
This made me sob! Raw honesty. This reflects amazing strength of a magnificent soul.
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23rd Oct 2018 7:17pm
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Anonymous
23rd Oct 2018 7:42pm
You are just something special, hope you know that.
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Anonymous
23rd Oct 2018 7:45pm
Hugs
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Re. Illuminate the Path
23rd Oct 2018 9:06pm
You don't know anything
Your assumptions are as jaded
As much as your charade
Your assumptions are as jaded
As much as your charade
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23rd Oct 2018 9:32pm
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Anonymous
24th Oct 2018 2:14am
Boss.. huge hell like.. absolute truth..
Dave
Dave
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24th Oct 2018 2:17am