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his ballerina
the sensitive place on my neck
where you give me tender kisses
always makes me giggle
with sunrise in your eyes
you make me feel special
your dainty little ballerina
dancing through your daydreams
on the periphery of lust
spinning on your trust
captivating woman
trespassing on your masculinity
where you get drunk on my beauty
just a sip is enough to make your mind race
you come on gentle
a blush flushing porcelain skin
then intentions become heated
skilled lover
with the touch like no other
touches my womanhood
caresses my lady
lets me know I'm your girl
you enter slowly, methodically
allowing me to peak
and like the ocean tides
you recede crashing into my passion
again and again
tip to lips
is like the first time
every time
I get giddy with anticipation
excited for you to fill the space
made only for you
cum into my honey cove
feed my hunger
lover of mine
until divine crescendo pushes me over
and I'm left calling your name
with forever on my mind
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Re. his ballerina
Anonymous
9th Oct 2018 4:40pm
Umm...Crimmy...I believe my eyeballs just popped out of my head, thank you. LOL.
That's very...beautiful...in a mildly explicit way.
Kidding! You're awesome, Crimmy! Your writing is always beautiful, like yourself, and I loved it!
Matthew.
That's very...beautiful...in a mildly explicit way.
Kidding! You're awesome, Crimmy! Your writing is always beautiful, like yourself, and I loved it!
Matthew.
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Re: Re. his ballerina
9th Oct 2018 4:41pm
giggles thank you dearest Matthew I'm glad you found this pleasing...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. his ballerina
Anonymous
9th Oct 2018 4:47pm
Crimmy,
You're a perfect balance between beauty and excitement and edginess! A perfect person.
Love,
Matthew.
You're a perfect balance between beauty and excitement and edginess! A perfect person.
Love,
Matthew.
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Re: Re. his ballerina
9th Oct 2018 4:53pm
Re: Re. his ballerina
Anonymous
9th Oct 2018 5:00pm
You too, my friend!! You, too!
Matthew.
Matthew.
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Re. his ballerina
9th Oct 2018 5:01pm
with the touch like no other touches my womanhood caresses my lady lets me know I'm your girl....different voices here..
and like the ocean tides you recede crashing into my passion again and again...is magnetic and I wanted to hear more about it.
and like the ocean tides you recede crashing into my passion again and again...is magnetic and I wanted to hear more about it.
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Re: Re. his ballerina
9th Oct 2018 5:10pm
thank you beautiful Nari usually my poems of this nature are much more detailed I wanted the hint of the erotic today I'm not sure why though...
I deeply appreciate the love you show my writing...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate the love you show my writing...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. his ballerina
9th Oct 2018 5:45pm
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9th Oct 2018 5:48pm
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
9th Oct 2018 6:32pm
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Re: Re. his ballerina
13th Oct 2018 4:44pm
Re. his ballerina
9th Oct 2018 7:29pm
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13th Oct 2018 4:44pm
Re. his ballerina
9th Oct 2018 7:35pm
on the threshold erotica with a charming compulsiveness...really enjoyed this Brenda
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Re: Re. his ballerina
13th Oct 2018 4:45pm
thank you graciously dearest Lawrence I love that you liked this...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. his ballerina
10th Oct 2018 00:24am
Romantic, yes, but the erotica soon takes precedence. The ballerina does have that honey cove to be filled. Loved how this built to a "divine crescendo." It sure gave me a thrill!
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Re: Re. his ballerina
13th Oct 2018 4:48pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow for seeing the different aspects of this poem... I'm so happy you liked it...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. his ballerina
10th Oct 2018 4:20am
Choreographed intensity. I might need to check out a ballet in the near future. Some sexy twirls in this write.
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Re: Re. his ballerina
13th Oct 2018 4:49pm
Re. his ballerina
Anonymous
10th Oct 2018 1:50pm
Oooh, beautiful Dark Angel, this is such sweet seduction it leaves one with a sigh escaping the lips. Gorgeous poetry! I love you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. his ballerina
13th Oct 2018 4:50pm
thank you beautiful Willow for feeling the gentle seduction here...
I love you...
love Brenda 💕
I love you...
love Brenda 💕
Re. his ballerina
12th Oct 2018 3:33am
Wow, sugar and spice! "....your dainty little ballerina dancing through your daydreams....". That's a great daydream. Loved the poem, erotic, sensual and has me fired up. Off to the gym to burn some energy!!
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Re: Re. his ballerina
13th Oct 2018 4:52pm
thank you graciously dearest DaVinci I'm so happy you found this pleasing...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. his ballerina
12th Oct 2018 11:01pm
This builds in pitch very well and paints a clear, evocative portrait. Enjoyed this Brenda. Hope you are doing alright. *hugs*
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Re: Re. his ballerina
13th Oct 2018 4:53pm
thank you dearest Daniel I'm so happy you enjoyed this and yes I'm doing good...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. his ballerina
A magnificent fantasia of sensual storytelling put into eloquence which transcends into total surrender. This had me burgeoning with need.
John
John
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Re: Re. his ballerina
18th Oct 2018 12:44pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Feb 2019 10:53am
21st Oct 2018 5:30pm
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21st Oct 2018 5:46pm