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beautiful scars
the day was quiet
as my mind spin
restless and reaching
far away from a place called sin
there I saw her
beautiful angel
in her need found worthy
to go forth into the world
in the eyes of divinity
claimed new
her darkness glorious silks
covering the war's scars
running her hand over them
she became brave
each one with a story
they give her entrance
into the land
of the forlorn and the forgotten
with a knowing tongue
speaking the dialect
of these beautiful people
she boldly traverses the great divide
I turn and see this woman is me
drug addict whore
adorned with my inflictions
not downtrodden
but victorious
in these domains I traveled
conquering the pain
learning the language of it
speaking to the darkness
it answers back
beautiful Queen
walk into the light
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Re. beautiful scars
8th Oct 2018 6:04pm
I love your scars...words are written on them only you see...
love always
Jeff
love always
Jeff
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Re: Re. beautiful scars
8th Oct 2018 6:08pm
thank you dearest Jeff for the love and beautifully poetic comment 💕
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. beautiful scars
8th Oct 2018 6:11pm
You are a beautiful Queen with a great gift! Walk into the light and don’t look back!
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Re: Re. beautiful scars
8th Oct 2018 6:13pm
thank you dearest Lyrical One for the love on this write and for me as well you moved me deeply...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Re: Re. beautiful scars
10th Oct 2018 2:37pm
Re. beautiful scars
8th Oct 2018 7:22pm
The internal scars are the most painful...I have buried mine...though I know they
are there just below the surface like a demon within me.
Dark Sun.
..Excellent write Crim...don't look back...just keep writing.
are there just below the surface like a demon within me.
Dark Sun.
..Excellent write Crim...don't look back...just keep writing.
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Re: Re. beautiful scars
10th Oct 2018 2:37pm
Re. beautiful scars
Anonymous
8th Oct 2018 7:25pm
How soooo much beauty got into a person with so much pain is beyond me, but it's a thing of wonder to see!
Love you Crimmy! So glad you're feeling better.
Matthew.
Love you Crimmy! So glad you're feeling better.
Matthew.
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Re: Re. beautiful scars
10th Oct 2018 2:39pm
thank you dearest Matthew did I ever tell you I love that you call me Crimmy? giggles it's so sweet...
I cherish you my friend...
love Brenda 🌹
I cherish you my friend...
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. beautiful scars
Anonymous
10th Oct 2018 3:11pm
Crimmy!
You did! And I love that you like your nickname! And I really love that it makes you smile! My mission is complete: making you see how beautiful you really are! Love you so, my friend!!!!!
Matthew.
You did! And I love that you like your nickname! And I really love that it makes you smile! My mission is complete: making you see how beautiful you really are! Love you so, my friend!!!!!
Matthew.
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Re: Re. beautiful scars
10th Oct 2018 2:39pm
Re. beautiful scars
8th Oct 2018 9:52pm
I hope you're keeping all these poems safe somewhere, Crim. One day a selection of them will make a tremendous poetic autobiography of a recovery from the depths - and a valuable gift to the world.
As ever standing with you as best one can through the virtual world. Josh.
As ever standing with you as best one can through the virtual world. Josh.
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Re: Re. beautiful scars
10th Oct 2018 2:41pm
thank you dearest Josh yes I am I started a book and then stalled on it I wasn't ready yet...
perhaps in time I will start again...
I appreciate deeply your encouragement...
love Brenda 💕
perhaps in time I will start again...
I appreciate deeply your encouragement...
love Brenda 💕
Re. beautiful scars
8th Oct 2018 9:56pm
Love how you conquer the pain. My favorite lines are the end:
speaking to the darkness
it answers back
beautiful Queen
walk into the light
The scars are beautiful, but so is your poem, Brenda. You've been familiar with such darkness, and now the light.
speaking to the darkness
it answers back
beautiful Queen
walk into the light
The scars are beautiful, but so is your poem, Brenda. You've been familiar with such darkness, and now the light.
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Re: Re. beautiful scars
10th Oct 2018 2:42pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow for your continued love and support... it's deeply appreciated...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. beautiful scars
9th Oct 2018 7:52am
Powerful poem from a seemingly powerful person. Wear your scars with pride, they make you who you are.
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Re: Re. beautiful scars
10th Oct 2018 2:43pm
thank you dearest RJM some days I feel powerful others not so much...
I deeply appreciate the love you've shown me...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate the love you've shown me...
love Brenda 💕