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r a i n viii
no solace
no shelter
like the one
that is
r a i n
you hide
under cover
and appreciate
from distance
its beauty
its charm
its magic
i say ever tried
rain
as your shelter?
if ya haven't
come with me
under
her cover
and see
she
heals
the soul
each drop
liquid blossom
an explosion
an[d] assault
on all things pain
rain
erasing your scars
soothing
healing
your being
to its essence
go
try
dry
is not the way
to be
no shelter
like the one
that is
r a i n
you hide
under cover
and appreciate
from distance
its beauty
its charm
its magic
i say ever tried
rain
as your shelter?
if ya haven't
come with me
under
her cover
and see
she
heals
the soul
each drop
liquid blossom
an explosion
an[d] assault
on all things pain
rain
erasing your scars
soothing
healing
your being
to its essence
go
try
dry
is not the way
to be
Published 6th Oct 2018
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6th Oct 2018 10:21pm
Words...so beautifully crafted ..
it is. as always..a peace of mind
to read to of you
it is. as always..a peace of mind
to read to of you
6th Oct 2018 10:26pm
Welcome
is the Artist Admired!!
Ms Noire!! :-)
what a joy
your presence!
beyond words
is the appreciation
of your generosity!!
and kindness!
humbled
and honored
the cold one here!
is the Artist Admired!!
Ms Noire!! :-)
what a joy
your presence!
beyond words
is the appreciation
of your generosity!!
and kindness!
humbled
and honored
the cold one here!
6th Oct 2018 10:26pm
"i say ever tried
rain
as your shelter?"
... now that's what I call some real out-of-the-box poetic thinking. Great lines.
rain
as your shelter?"
... now that's what I call some real out-of-the-box poetic thinking. Great lines.
6th Oct 2018 10:33pm
welcome
dear Friend!!
welcome
also dear friend
is your kind review!
to be honest, it's the subject itself/herself
that pulls one
out
of the box..
as mentioned in the last stanza
staying inside the box
is staying dry
and that i believe
is not the way..
beyond words
is the the appreciation
of your support Josh!!
dear Friend!!
welcome
also dear friend
is your kind review!
to be honest, it's the subject itself/herself
that pulls one
out
of the box..
as mentioned in the last stanza
staying inside the box
is staying dry
and that i believe
is not the way..
beyond words
is the the appreciation
of your support Josh!!
6th Oct 2018 11:03pm
I never saw rain as a shelter before but your words have lead to a re-think. Is it an oxymoron type thing? I'm learning I hope. ;-)
22nd Oct 2018 1:18pm
welcome
is the Poet Admired
Welcome
is the friend!
glad about the scribble maaking you think bro. :-)
always an honor
to have your presence and insight on my scribbles.
is the Poet Admired
Welcome
is the friend!
glad about the scribble maaking you think bro. :-)
always an honor
to have your presence and insight on my scribbles.
Anonymous
7th Oct 2018 1:17am
This...yes, this is truth expressed perfectly. I'm holding this one close
...Willow
...Willow
22nd Oct 2018 1:20pm
welcome
is the Poet Admired
Welcome
is the Friend!
honored and humbled
dear Friend
with your generosity and kindness. Glad to know of souls
that hold dear this blessing of nature that is rain.
appreciation
beyond words
is the Poet Admired
Welcome
is the Friend!
honored and humbled
dear Friend
with your generosity and kindness. Glad to know of souls
that hold dear this blessing of nature that is rain.
appreciation
beyond words
7th Oct 2018 1:49am
i say ever tried
rain
as your shelter?
now that some line very thought provoking
awesome poem
rain
as your shelter?
now that some line very thought provoking
awesome poem
22nd Oct 2018 1:21pm
Welcome
is the poet admired
welcome
is the Friend!
also welcome
is the humbling appreciation
and the presence
appreciation
immense
is the poet admired
welcome
is the Friend!
also welcome
is the humbling appreciation
and the presence
appreciation
immense
Anonymous
8th Oct 2018 9:19pm
"I love the rain. It washes memories from the sidewalk of life." - W. Allen. lol.
Awesome, Cold One! You rule.
And I thought of something regarding your nickname(at least the one I gave you), Cold One.
It does not reflect you, because you're definitely not a cold person, but, there are different kinds of people on here, some people who aren't really so friendly, and are hesitant to talk to you for some reason or another, and others who you can just tell are warm, and friendly, and engaging, people you could just meet and go out for a beer with and have a great time immediately. You're the latter, my friend, and therefore, Cold One symbolizes the fact that you're a great guy, and it would be cool to just go out for a 'cold one' with you. Does that make sense? Good...now if you could let ME know what I said! lol.
Awesome writing, Cold One!
MZ.
Awesome, Cold One! You rule.
And I thought of something regarding your nickname(at least the one I gave you), Cold One.
It does not reflect you, because you're definitely not a cold person, but, there are different kinds of people on here, some people who aren't really so friendly, and are hesitant to talk to you for some reason or another, and others who you can just tell are warm, and friendly, and engaging, people you could just meet and go out for a beer with and have a great time immediately. You're the latter, my friend, and therefore, Cold One symbolizes the fact that you're a great guy, and it would be cool to just go out for a 'cold one' with you. Does that make sense? Good...now if you could let ME know what I said! lol.
Awesome writing, Cold One!
MZ.
22nd Oct 2018 1:27pm
:-)
welcome
my dear brother!
my apologies for the delay in response.
also welcome
is your warm and awesome gesture. I am grateful for many ..well all things in life, but on top of the list will be the presence of warm souls and kind friends like you Matthew.
I can relate to that description of people you mentioned dear Friend, i have blessed enough to have come across a few in life like that. Truly blessed.
because of your kindness i will unlock the reason for this cold_fusion being my nom de guerre sooner than i ever thought. watch this space.
Honestly it would be my pleasure to share a cold one with you. though a teetotaler, but wouldn't mind sharing the table and have a cold one some day.
thank You is an understatement dear bro!
warm regards
Cold One ;-)
welcome
my dear brother!
my apologies for the delay in response.
also welcome
is your warm and awesome gesture. I am grateful for many ..well all things in life, but on top of the list will be the presence of warm souls and kind friends like you Matthew.
I can relate to that description of people you mentioned dear Friend, i have blessed enough to have come across a few in life like that. Truly blessed.
because of your kindness i will unlock the reason for this cold_fusion being my nom de guerre sooner than i ever thought. watch this space.
Honestly it would be my pleasure to share a cold one with you. though a teetotaler, but wouldn't mind sharing the table and have a cold one some day.
thank You is an understatement dear bro!
warm regards
Cold One ;-)
12th Oct 2018 1:00pm
Some, like yourself, can stand in a downpour and never be 'all wet',
while others drown in but a drop, due only to their perspectives.
Life comes only with the umbrella we choose, likewise with parasols.
while others drown in but a drop, due only to their perspectives.
Life comes only with the umbrella we choose, likewise with parasols.
13th Oct 2018 9:55pm
