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Masterpiece
They stand naked on the set
The director hasn't called them yet
But the male lead prepares, strokes his cock
Keeping one eye on the clock
They're called for an inane intro
With dialogue that doesn't flow
After insipid lines are said
They're then positioned on a triple bed
They start with a tongue-twisted kiss
A prelude to the coming "bliss"
Then the actress strokes her leading man
Following the scrawled and scripted plan
They do what they need to make a buck
Even the lowest budget fuck
The "action" never seems to cease
Until they complete this masterpiece.
The director hasn't called them yet
But the male lead prepares, strokes his cock
Keeping one eye on the clock
They're called for an inane intro
With dialogue that doesn't flow
After insipid lines are said
They're then positioned on a triple bed
They start with a tongue-twisted kiss
A prelude to the coming "bliss"
Then the actress strokes her leading man
Following the scrawled and scripted plan
They do what they need to make a buck
Even the lowest budget fuck
The "action" never seems to cease
Until they complete this masterpiece.
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Re. Masterpiece
Anonymous
6th Oct 2018 11:50pm
What many don't understand is that porn is such for those who enjoy it. Personally, I don't find anything bad about it, if those who take part are freely consensual about it, hopefully enjoy it and understand that those who watch do so for the same reason. It should never be forced upon or reason of abuse on those people who don't want to do anything like that. No means no. But you my friend talk about it as a means of living and to be fare, sadly many are forced into it. "And they do what they need to make a buck"! Sad but true. That's why, I confess, I love porn, but I always look for reality porn, where people share their own true experiences and freely, happily enjoying it. I find nothing wrong. People should actually feel deep respect for people that take the courage to put themselves out there. I don't accept force or violence ever. But bodies that enjoy themselves are a true art. Thank you for reminding us that it isn't all glamor. But behind there are real people with real feelings and that they have a life beyond the set. Great work Crowfly. J
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7th Oct 2018 1:45am
I agree with your wonderful comment. Porn may not be for everyone, but aficionados have every right to enjoy the flicks. And the actors are, like you say, just doing their job, and hopefully enjoying it. I just wish they had some dramatically powerful films in the States that had hard core footage. "In the Realm of the Senses," a Japanese film, has it both ways. Thank you Juvenalis!
Re. Masterpiece
7th Oct 2018 1:31am
dearest Sir Crow I wish they would cut out all the bad acting
and just get down to the business of fucking...
after all that's what most of want to see anyway...
I love this it spotlights the truth of the game...
love Brenda 💋
and just get down to the business of fucking...
after all that's what most of want to see anyway...
I love this it spotlights the truth of the game...
love Brenda 💋
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7th Oct 2018 1:44am
Thanks Brenda! I recommend a cable show called "The Deuce" if you want to see some relatively honest work about the subject from popular media. You might have already caught it. But you're right. The point of real porn is the fucking, not dramatics that are generally laughable.
Re. Masterpiece
7th Oct 2018 1:51am
another classic painting of words my friend
masterpiece it is
you rule in this form of writing
awesome poem
masterpiece it is
you rule in this form of writing
awesome poem
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9th Oct 2018 2:37am
Thanks poetOftragedy. I often try to think like a journalist in writing my lines. Sometimes it works, sometimes not.
Re. Masterpiece
7th Oct 2018 4:54am
Accurate portrayal of many of the flicks. Supply and demand, the industry supplies what is demanded. Eloquently captured by your prose.
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9th Oct 2018 2:39am
I wish I could bear witness to an actual filming. Just don't know how these pros pull it off. Thank you Leo!
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9th Oct 2018 2:41am
A little irony usually helps with a hard subject, seems to me. I'm glad you enjoyed this SweetOblivion!
Re. Masterpiece
14th Oct 2018 9:02pm
Another effortless flow of rhyme ... I remain so so jealous ... you have a gift ...
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