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Poetic Wine
I am drinking the poetic wine
the luscious nectar tastes divine
It’s formed by sophisticated lines
coming from his delicate mind
He’s more than a licensed brewer
creates such an affectionate flavor
I let his magic dreamy endeavor
make up my world that I think over
His baritone voice hypnotizes
his sturdy eyes soften when he smiles
his comfy attitude lights up my sky
grows passion to heaven daringly high
A ray of light shines in his eyes
when he looks straight into mine
projects his refined and spiritual style
tender as water, blazing like fire
Would love to get drunk in his poetic wine
the luscious nectar tastes divine
It’s formed by sophisticated lines
coming from his delicate mind
He’s more than a licensed brewer
creates such an affectionate flavor
I let his magic dreamy endeavor
make up my world that I think over
His baritone voice hypnotizes
his sturdy eyes soften when he smiles
his comfy attitude lights up my sky
grows passion to heaven daringly high
A ray of light shines in his eyes
when he looks straight into mine
projects his refined and spiritual style
tender as water, blazing like fire
Would love to get drunk in his poetic wine
Author's Note
It's so intoxicating....so in love...
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Re. Poetic Wine
Anonymous
6th Oct 2018 6:03pm
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Of course my dear friend. Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thought...
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
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6th Oct 2018 6:41pm
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7th Oct 2018 3:20am
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6th Oct 2018 9:00pm
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7th Oct 2018 3:21am
Thank you my dear friend for the nice feedback.
Glad to meet you here!
love
Jasmine
Glad to meet you here!
love
Jasmine
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7th Oct 2018 5:16am
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6th Oct 2018 11:16pm
Jasmine, my dear, this is your best work... such wonderful rhyme and flow ...you continue to stretch in talent and substance... I love to read you grow
He must love you so...to show his heart bowed
love
Jeff
He must love you so...to show his heart bowed
love
Jeff
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7th Oct 2018 3:22am
Oh thank you so much for everything you have done for me. I am a blessed one.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
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7th Oct 2018 2:06am
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7th Oct 2018 3:24am
Sure my dear friend. It tastes very nice. I would love to share...
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2018 2:48am
A fine wine indeed 🍷
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7th Oct 2018 3:26am
Dear Rags, so glad to have your read. The wine tastes fantastic...
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. Poetic Wine
I see many times you refer to yourself as blessed and truly you are. Not only with a gift of your expressions but the love you experience.
1 Corinthians 13:13
13 And now these three remain: faith, hope and love. But the greatest of these is love.
My prayers for you, that you continue in this blessing, and to share and inspire us in your love
1 Corinthians 13:13
13 And now these three remain: faith, hope and love. But the greatest of these is love.
My prayers for you, that you continue in this blessing, and to share and inspire us in your love
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11th Oct 2018 3:45pm
Dear TIG, how impressive your comment is. I am grateful for that you spent time reading and sharing your thought. Your words makes me love my poem more...
Your read is precious for me.
love
Jasmine
Your read is precious for me.
love
Jasmine
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11th Oct 2018 3:52pm
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11th Oct 2018 3:58pm
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9th Dec 2018 1:29pm
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9th Dec 2018 1:32pm
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3rd Apr 2019 5:59pm
That was a lovely write and show of affection. You sound like the type of lady one would enjoy sharing a bottle of fine Pinot Noir with.
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3rd Apr 2019 6:17pm
Thank you so much my dear friend for the nice comment. It's my first time to hear the kine of wine. It should taste sweet and fragrant.:)
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
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26th May 2019 2:29pm
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26th May 2019 2:43pm
Thank you my dear friend for the nice feedback.
And welcome to DUP.
Love
Jasmine
And welcome to DUP.
Love
Jasmine
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14th Apr 2020 2:49am
So wonderful, Jasmine!! I cannot express how much I love your writings. Almost every time I come to your page I stumble upon a jewel. Really descriptive, creative, sensitive and sweet. Lovely :) <3
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14th Apr 2020 3:06am
Thank you, my dear friend. You don't know how much I appreciate your lovely words. You made me feel I can write more. Your encouragement is precious.
Love
Jasmine
Love
Jasmine
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14th Apr 2020 3:07am
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14th Apr 2020 3:11am
Thank you so much. It's my honor to have your read. You are a very special soul I have known here.