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Leaf Treat
The leaves, having gathered
sunlight all Summer
are now gently placed
at our feet
ready to be raked up
composted
and in Nature’s cyclic perfection
transformed into vital humus
ready to be spread
for next year’s veg
and other special treats.
sunlight all Summer
are now gently placed
at our feet
ready to be raked up
composted
and in Nature’s cyclic perfection
transformed into vital humus
ready to be spread
for next year’s veg
and other special treats.
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 2nd Oct 2018
| Edited 8th Mar 2024
Author's Note
For the competition: Create a visual poem about the season #fall (autumn), hosted by admin.
(photo credit: annie-spratt-557158-unsplash)
(photo credit: annie-spratt-557158-unsplash)
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Re. Leaf Treat
2nd Oct 2018 3:33pm
Josh, lovely images of transformation and growth even as winter creeps in. Bless
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Re: Re. Leaf Treat
2nd Oct 2018 8:49pm
Thanks Mel for the visit, cold mornings here but reaching just a tad under 30degC at the hot part of the day. Still no rain. Still watering veg & garden every day.
Re. Leaf Treat
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2018 5:17pm
My friend, you have transformed the image of death into a festival of life. Fall or autumn, as many say, is the prelude of the the season of sleep, winter, which many see as a metaphor of the grave. You truly have made it a metaphor for rebirth. Well done. J
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Re: Re. Leaf Treat
2nd Oct 2018 8:52pm
Thank you Juvenalis, having originally been trained as a problem-solving goal-oriented engineer it's taken many decades to accept life is cyclical - not linear - and every 'death' somehow contributes to rebirth and new life - as you well point out. I've found it a much more peaceful way of accepting what life brings.
Re. Leaf Treat
2nd Oct 2018 6:29pm
We are desert dwellers and just now coming into our growing season. But thanks for the memory.
Looks real nice with the photo.
Ain't it fun to collaborate?
Looks real nice with the photo.
Ain't it fun to collaborate?
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Re: Re. Leaf Treat
2nd Oct 2018 8:55pm
The weather here offers possibilities of all-year round growing (for somethings) - but every year is a bit hit-&-miss due partly to unpredictable weather patterns. Collaborating with Mother Earth is the only real game in town, if you get it right abundance is yours for the picking. :))
Re. Leaf Treat
2nd Oct 2018 7:06pm
Very nice, Josh... really captures the ambience... and delightfully punny title-ing.
I am especially taken with that last mysterious line... Ely
I am especially taken with that last mysterious line... Ely
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Re: Re. Leaf Treat
2nd Oct 2018 8:57pm
Thank you Ely, the last line is slipped in due to experience every year of odd surprises where something grows amazingly unexpected.
Re. Leaf Treat
2nd Oct 2018 7:57pm
Love how you point out that nature is cyclic. Beauty never lasts in its pristine, usual form, but is reborn. Love the layout and your reading. Truly fine work!
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Re: Re. Leaf Treat
2nd Oct 2018 9:12pm
Thank you Crowfly - nature seems to teach me a different rhythm where a huge amount of hidden effort underpins a sudden flowering of fruit or flowers - and somehow the cyclical element of life is so much more reassuring than the linear goal-go-getter approach. It's the latter approach that's destroying the planet when it could be so different (as Freddie Mercury, amongst others, pointed out)
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3rd Oct 2018 1:09am
Re: Re. Leaf Treat
3rd Oct 2018 9:13am
Yes, thank you, life as a cycle is so much more rewarding if we can let go of linear goal-achieving as the only focus.