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A Sexy Tanka
The flavor of you
That’s in your secret garden
Please let me partake
Of your moist succulent fruit
For I so savor your taste
That’s in your secret garden
Please let me partake
Of your moist succulent fruit
For I so savor your taste
Published 27th Sep 2018
Author's Note
My entry for the 'Joy of Giving' competition. Written as a Tanka. 5,7,5,7,7 syllable count.
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27th Sep 2018 6:44am
Pic makes me wonder if that was the real forbidden fruit Eve went on to offer Adam. As to the poem, Mmmmm.
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