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Seasons change
Impatiently waiting
Summer soon about to fade
still hot winds are blowing
last breath of a season
the soil awaits the seed
River bed sand runs
through my fingers
decomposed matter added
fertile ground will soon
give birth to tender life
When seedlings open
first delicate leaves
like little arms opening
to greet the light
with it will come
new energy
new joy
new ideas
new poems
Impatiently waiting
Summer soon about to fade
still hot winds are blowing
last breath of a season
the soil awaits the seed
River bed sand runs
through my fingers
decomposed matter added
fertile ground will soon
give birth to tender life
When seedlings open
first delicate leaves
like little arms opening
to greet the light
with it will come
new energy
new joy
new ideas
new poems
Impatiently waiting
Published 21st Sep 2018
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Anonymous
21st Sep 2018 10:28pm
That's beautiful, Angel!!
I really enjoyed that.
I LOVE that line about the 'little arms opening'!
Reading list.
Matthew.
I really enjoyed that.
I LOVE that line about the 'little arms opening'!
Reading list.
Matthew.
21st Sep 2018 10:33pm
Thank you Matthew. Yes, I teared up a bit when I wrote that. They look so much like little people when they just made it out of the seed. I am glad you too appreciate the image.
Anonymous
21st Sep 2018 10:42pm
Awesome, my friend!
Love this site, and you poets!
Matthew.
Love this site, and you poets!
Matthew.
Anonymous
21st Sep 2018 10:43pm
It's such a perfect way to say it, and yet there's both a little hope, and a little sadness about the little arms! Great writing! I love it!
Matthew.
Matthew.
22nd Sep 2018 00:39am
Anonymous
22nd Sep 2018 2:29am
I like to think so, Angel. Thank you, as are you. I can tell from your writing!
Thanks again!!
Matthew.
Thanks again!!
Matthew.
21st Sep 2018 10:41pm
Mother Nature's cycle ... always a great anticipation ... :))
(if you're on FB you might be interested in our local 'humus project' and other initiatives:
https://www.facebook.com/earthkeepership/
https://www.facebook.com/groups/239983559913785/
(if you're on FB you might be interested in our local 'humus project' and other initiatives:
https://www.facebook.com/earthkeepership/
https://www.facebook.com/groups/239983559913785/
22nd Sep 2018 00:37am
I got off fb a few months ago...maybe I get back on. I had a lot of pics from our garden and veggies. I sleep over it. I am surely interested in your projects.
Thank you Josh
Thank you Josh
22nd Sep 2018 4:36pm
Hi Angelast,
No worries, try our website:
https://thehumusproject.org/
(it's in 4 languages, German included)
PS: Don't get back on FB - I'm looking for an opportune time to get off it - 3 years on it is long enough for me.
No worries, try our website:
https://thehumusproject.org/
(it's in 4 languages, German included)
PS: Don't get back on FB - I'm looking for an opportune time to get off it - 3 years on it is long enough for me.
22nd Sep 2018 00:55am
22nd Sep 2018 1:18am
22nd Sep 2018 6:38am
Yes, here in the desert, once summer fades the rest of the year feels indeed like spring. Life resumes.
Thank you for dropping by Kumar.
Thank you for dropping by Kumar.
22nd Sep 2018 2:11pm
Echo Kumar
yes
to expression
and
the 'new' life!
indeed special
for what and how much that line
mentioned by Matthew above
delivers
and affects!
yes
to expression
and
the 'new' life!
indeed special
for what and how much that line
mentioned by Matthew above
delivers
and affects!
22nd Sep 2018 4:54pm
Wow Angelast, such deep imagery you paint here. I too welcome the death of summer and all that entails ❤️
Big likes 😊
Zazzles
Big likes 😊
Zazzles
23rd Sep 2018 7:44pm
23rd Sep 2018 10:01pm
This reminds me of a performance piece, since it maps out the journey into the next season. You are no novice.
23rd Sep 2018 10:09pm
23rd Sep 2018 10:36pm
Happy first day of autumn ... this poem captures so much of what I feel ... I am both ready for fall ... but sad to see summer go ...
23rd Sep 2018 10:49pm
Yes, autumn....wonderful. That's like spring for me here in the desert. As I recall you are in Alabama, right? Do you have a real autumn with colored leaves?
The last days of summer for me are like pushing the envelope to the max. Then....there is the relief...the nights will get cooler...activity is coming back....rejoyce!
The last days of summer for me are like pushing the envelope to the max. Then....there is the relief...the nights will get cooler...activity is coming back....rejoyce!
23rd Sep 2018 10:52pm
Not a real autumn ... I used to live in Maryland ... the leaves do change ... must later ... not as vibrant ... the most beautiful foliage I have seen was in Vermont and Mont Tremblant Canada ... still rather hot ... upper 90s today ... I do look forward to cooler weather ...
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