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Between Us
Solemnly will I trace over every scar with the most earnest desire to know their every story
Encasing you in my tentative arms; yearning for each devout discovery of your tender body
My soul searching and aching to soothe every feeling of solicitude hidden within your own
As I bathe in joy at the propensity of your beating heart against mine
Pressing my pliant lips against yours; my tongue also grazing over your quickening pulse
My body then yielding to your rigidity as we are then consecrated; flesh to flesh
No spoken words need be conveyed as our warm breath radiates our whispering pleas Exhalting each other in the taking and giving of pleasure with our every heady cry Rhythmically colliding while our bodies merge in the most beautifully perfect unison As we then both succumb to the beautiful war of our naked flesh and limbs Sweetly is our flesh still enterwined; the propensity of your beating heart still singing against my own
Published 13th Sep 2018
| Edited 9th Mar 2019
Author's Note
Yes; I re-wrote With You
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13th Sep 2018 8:07pm
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My body then yielding to your rigidity as we are then consecrated; flesh to flesh
No spoken words need be conveyed as our warm breath radiates our whispering pleas
Exhalting each other in the taking and giving of pleasure with our every heady cry
Rhythmically colliding while our bodies merge in the most beautifully perfect unison
As we then both succumb to the beautiful war of our naked flesh and limbs
My body then yielding to your rigidity as we are then consecrated; flesh to flesh
No spoken words need be conveyed as our warm breath radiates our whispering pleas
Exhalting each other in the taking and giving of pleasure with our every heady cry
Rhythmically colliding while our bodies merge in the most beautifully perfect unison
As we then both succumb to the beautiful war of our naked flesh and limbs
14th Sep 2018 2:49pm
Anonymous
13th Sep 2018 8:46pm
"My soul searching and aching to soothe every feeling of solicitude hidden within your own
As I bathe in joy at the propensity of your beating heart against mine"! This is the apotheosis of erotica! A true hymn to the masterpiece of pleasure! Words here are not wasted, but guided perfectly to paint the picture. And you have done it so well! Fantastic!
As I bathe in joy at the propensity of your beating heart against mine"! This is the apotheosis of erotica! A true hymn to the masterpiece of pleasure! Words here are not wasted, but guided perfectly to paint the picture. And you have done it so well! Fantastic!
14th Sep 2018 2:51pm
Aww, thank you sweet friend. You are too kind! This was the first piece I've felt myself more alive in for weeks so it felt rather nice.☺
Anonymous
13th Sep 2018 8:58pm
LOVE THIS ♥️!
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