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Limitless Pleasure
[font=Times New Roman][i][b] Its a rush he gives me when he penetrates my dripping love nest making me over flow with every stroke he gives me. He slows it down just to tease me almost making me scream out in pleasure but he never takes his eyes off of me. He starts to stroke slowly and catches a rhythm that I can't resist as I start to moan loudly he goes faster until I'm screaming his name yet he never seems to lose his composure as he takes me to another limit of pleasure
Published 30th Oct 2011
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30th Oct 2011 7:37pm
...just kidding -- but do you really think describing your gash as " a dripping love nest" is original or erotic?
It sounds like some kind of leaky bird flapping its wings in a forlorn world that's a gangrape away from the 'limitless pleasure' of your title.
But then erotic poetry isn't easy - one wrong turn and the whole thing can crash.
Maybe you might try your hand at something less challenging at first?
Keep writing ~ Abra
It sounds like some kind of leaky bird flapping its wings in a forlorn world that's a gangrape away from the 'limitless pleasure' of your title.
But then erotic poetry isn't easy - one wrong turn and the whole thing can crash.
Maybe you might try your hand at something less challenging at first?
Keep writing ~ Abra
30th Oct 2011 7:55pm
31st Oct 2011 00:00am
1st Nov 2011 1:11pm
Teasing. Enchanting. Never quite hits off, nere quite lets go. Captivating to say the least.:)
13th Oct 2014 00:39am
