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The Swamp aka DUP
I affectionately refer to DUP as "The Swamp"
Sometimes I have nothing to say
Because there's too much to say
This place mirrors life
Humidity
Hot flashes
Poision pills and a pen
Paying homage to the site
It gave me a voice and a home
Almost killed my spirit repeatedly
Bit me like a mosquito I couldn't kill
I keep coming back though
I'm a street fighter
Redemption always lurking
Finding peace in myself, another apology laid down
A little bit of writer's block today
I'm still writing though
It's my kool aid, I'll drink if I want to
A sex poem or two waiting in the wings
The Swamp, my friend and foe
My evil and my glory
My freak flag and my courage
My home when nobody else wanted me ...
Sometimes I have nothing to say
Because there's too much to say
This place mirrors life
Humidity
Hot flashes
Poision pills and a pen
Paying homage to the site
It gave me a voice and a home
Almost killed my spirit repeatedly
Bit me like a mosquito I couldn't kill
I keep coming back though
I'm a street fighter
Redemption always lurking
Finding peace in myself, another apology laid down
A little bit of writer's block today
I'm still writing though
It's my kool aid, I'll drink if I want to
A sex poem or two waiting in the wings
The Swamp, my friend and foe
My evil and my glory
My freak flag and my courage
My home when nobody else wanted me ...
Author's Note
I don't know how to be here and I don't know how to leave
I do know it's my blood
I do know it's my blood
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Re. The Swamp aka DUP
11th Sep 2018 1:01pm
I'm grateful for you through it all
it's been a wild, beautiful ride
I wouldn't have it any other way ❤
great write...
love Brenda
it's been a wild, beautiful ride
I wouldn't have it any other way ❤
great write...
love Brenda
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Re. The Swamp aka DUP
11th Sep 2018 1:33pm
But you're here.
And that my friend means a lot to a lot of fellow Dup swampies😆😚
And that my friend means a lot to a lot of fellow Dup swampies😆😚
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11th Sep 2018 1:42pm
Re. The Swamp aka DUP
11th Sep 2018 1:41pm
I'm not good at conflict but I don't run away from it either.
It's a morbid sense to fight knowing there will be light at the end if enough blood is spilled.
My conflict with you was like that. Then there was a beam of light and I could suddenly see again. Reading and rereading your poem "blue" helped guide my path. I realized underneath all your violent ink was a heart being blown apart but it was a heart that needed help to heal. Your ink is often more violent than I can handle so I skip those. But "blue" and today's poem show your human side, the writer I need to read because these poems are the Brenda I used to know before the wheels fell off.
It's a swamp but I live there and it's a part of my DNA for better or worse ....
It's a morbid sense to fight knowing there will be light at the end if enough blood is spilled.
My conflict with you was like that. Then there was a beam of light and I could suddenly see again. Reading and rereading your poem "blue" helped guide my path. I realized underneath all your violent ink was a heart being blown apart but it was a heart that needed help to heal. Your ink is often more violent than I can handle so I skip those. But "blue" and today's poem show your human side, the writer I need to read because these poems are the Brenda I used to know before the wheels fell off.
It's a swamp but I live there and it's a part of my DNA for better or worse ....
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I understand dearest Poet I'm really making an effort not to write dark to get behind the real emotions and not hide from them...I won't run from conflict either we have that in common...
I'm happy you're seeing more of me in my later poems I have one last shot at saving my life...everything is on the line at the moment...my marriage everything...
I've been messing up so bad I have to stand and fight now or it will be over...I'm getting away from my source of temptation for three weeks...so I will quit... the real test will be when I return my hopes is that this will be enough time to get my head together...
I want to be me not this angry person hiding my true fears and emotions...
I'm afraid honestly...
well, that's it...
love Brenda
I'm happy you're seeing more of me in my later poems I have one last shot at saving my life...everything is on the line at the moment...my marriage everything...
I've been messing up so bad I have to stand and fight now or it will be over...I'm getting away from my source of temptation for three weeks...so I will quit... the real test will be when I return my hopes is that this will be enough time to get my head together...
I want to be me not this angry person hiding my true fears and emotions...
I'm afraid honestly...
well, that's it...
love Brenda
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Re. The Swamp aka DUP
11th Sep 2018 2:18pm
I salute your inner strength to fight .... for your life
The past doesn't matter
You matter
Courage my friend ...
The past doesn't matter
You matter
Courage my friend ...
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11th Sep 2018 2:22pm
Re. The Swamp aka DUP
11th Sep 2018 2:39pm
You said a lot without having anything to say. Once the liquor passes and the coffee takes hold I shall pen as well.
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Re: Re. The Swamp aka DUP
11th Sep 2018 2:51pm
No liquor last night
Slept well for once
Gotta remember that
Look forward to your ink
Slept well for once
Gotta remember that
Look forward to your ink
Re. The Swamp aka DUP
11th Sep 2018 2:47pm
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11th Sep 2018 2:52pm
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Re. The Swamp aka DUP
11th Sep 2018 7:45pm
Superb write...DUP is like being in a storm sometimes...
Great to see you are getting on with Crim.
Dark Sun.
Great to see you are getting on with Crim.
Dark Sun.
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Re: Re. The Swamp aka DUP
11th Sep 2018 8:18pm
Thanks Dark
Crim and I worked through a lot of chaos but we understand each other .....
All good
Crim and I worked through a lot of chaos but we understand each other .....
All good
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Anonymous
11th Sep 2018 9:40pm
Boss.. so glad you're here.. you inspire us all as well.. big like..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. The Swamp aka DUP
11th Sep 2018 9:49pm
Thx
I think we all inspire each other in one form or another
Appreciate the nod and RL add
I think we all inspire each other in one form or another
Appreciate the nod and RL add
Re. The Swamp aka DUP
11th Sep 2018 9:43pm
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11th Sep 2018 9:50pm
Doing what I know
Spilling verse and trying to stay out of trouble, often it's not so smooth a ride ....
Spilling verse and trying to stay out of trouble, often it's not so smooth a ride ....
Re. The Swamp aka DUP
12th Sep 2018 2:56am
I really feel this and agree with it,
I've often thought of how Emily Dickinson s 'admiring bog' seems a fitting comparison as well..
( An irony comparing people to frogs )
I've often thought of how Emily Dickinson s 'admiring bog' seems a fitting comparison as well..
( An irony comparing people to frogs )
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Re. The Swamp aka DUP
12th Sep 2018 3:02am
There's no censorship here
I love it and I hate it
There's always a price for No Filter
It's what we have
All you have to do is write
Thx PR
I love it and I hate it
There's always a price for No Filter
It's what we have
All you have to do is write
Thx PR
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Re: Re. The Swamp aka DUP
24th Sep 2018 11:37pm
Thank you so much
That line does bring it home. Every so often you get lucky like that....
That line does bring it home. Every so often you get lucky like that....