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Public Apology to Crimsin
I sliced and diced you this morning
It was without cause and truly rude
You and I have had our differences
Basically we're both street fighters
We wear aftershave and perfume
Hoping to cover for our sins
What I did however was criminal
A rubbernecking at a car wreck
Hoping to get some gore
This is a public apology
With sincerity and I hope grace
You said I was a better man than what I portrayed
I hope one day to be that man
I still have a ways to go
My apologies Brenda
It was without cause and truly rude
You and I have had our differences
Basically we're both street fighters
We wear aftershave and perfume
Hoping to cover for our sins
What I did however was criminal
A rubbernecking at a car wreck
Hoping to get some gore
This is a public apology
With sincerity and I hope grace
You said I was a better man than what I portrayed
I hope one day to be that man
I still have a ways to go
My apologies Brenda
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Re. Public Apology to Crimsin
9th Sep 2018 8:57pm
Although a kind gesture, would a public apology not bring more attention to whatever happened? I don't mean to be critical, just thinking in light. I hope people don't ask you guys a million questions. Or even one. It's nodody else's business.
Take all with a grain of salt, and best of luck,
~T
Take all with a grain of salt, and best of luck,
~T
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9th Sep 2018 9:17pm
Re. Public Apology to Crimsin
dearest Poet this says a lot to me about you
I told you it was alright and we'd be fine
you didn't have to do this but you did
I truly appreciate it from my heart...
I love you as a person.
love Brenda
I told you it was alright and we'd be fine
you didn't have to do this but you did
I truly appreciate it from my heart...
I love you as a person.
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Public Apology to Crimsin
9th Sep 2018 9:19pm
It was the right thing to do after doing the wrong thing first
Thank you for accepting my apology ...
With respect
Poet
Thank you for accepting my apology ...
With respect
Poet
Re. Public Apology to Crimsin
9th Sep 2018 9:21pm
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9th Sep 2018 9:23pm
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9th Sep 2018 9:33pm
Re: Re. Public Apology to Crimsin
9th Sep 2018 9:36pm
Thanks bk
I know when I've crossed the line, wish I knew before I did it ....
I know when I've crossed the line, wish I knew before I did it ....
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9th Sep 2018 9:43pm
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9th Sep 2018 9:49pm
Re. Public Apology to Crimsin
10th Sep 2018 3:20am
Re: Re. Public Apology to Crimsin
10th Sep 2018 3:26am
It don't come easy son, you gotta make a lot of mistakes to carry this water
Humbled Lo, it's been that kind of day ...
Humbled Lo, it's been that kind of day ...
Re. Public Apology to Crimsin
10th Sep 2018 12:44pm
Don't know what happened, won't go looking either, cuz it ain't none of my (or anyone else's) business.
Just happy to see a couple of adults on the hollowed pages.
Congrats to you both.
Just happy to see a couple of adults on the hollowed pages.
Congrats to you both.
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Re. Public Apology to Crimsin
10th Sep 2018 12:49pm
Re. Public Apology to Crimsin
10th Sep 2018 3:02pm
Sounds like a love/hate relationship? I like Crim..she is a force to be reckoned with.
I'm intrigued by this feud though...
Like
Dark Sun.
I'm intrigued by this feud though...
Like
Dark Sun.
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Re: Re. Public Apology to Crimsin
10th Sep 2018 4:31pm
Feud is over
Just one of those things that got stretched out more than it should have. I take the blame for the final straw.
All good
Thx
Just one of those things that got stretched out more than it should have. I take the blame for the final straw.
All good
Thx
Re. Public Apology to Crimsin
10th Sep 2018 5:47pm
Re. Public Apology to Crimsin
10th Sep 2018 5:58pm
I think it's my first public one .....
It was the right thing to do, mending fences
It was the right thing to do, mending fences