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Autumn Love
She beckons me into her flame,
Caressing me with angel wings.
This passion plays a wicked game,
As love cascades like desert spring.
This dappled core of destiny,
As summer fades in shades of grey.
The longing that she stirs in me,
On lonely nights sweet thoughts pervade.
My love for her in Autumn's shroud;
My soul unbridled by her verse.
Her beauty lifts me like a cloud,
This strange desire I shall immerse.
A tender touch of feathered quill;
The mournful sun of harvest gloom.
The blissful air as morning chills,
A taste of her in every room.
The pallid wash of autumn sky;
The falling leaves on frozen ground.
This feeling does electrify,
A love so pure is tightly bound.
She whispers as I sleep adrift,
Into the arms of velvet night.
Her psychic waves converse in mist,
This beauty rains a golden light.
Caressing me with angel wings.
This passion plays a wicked game,
As love cascades like desert spring.
This dappled core of destiny,
As summer fades in shades of grey.
The longing that she stirs in me,
On lonely nights sweet thoughts pervade.
My love for her in Autumn's shroud;
My soul unbridled by her verse.
Her beauty lifts me like a cloud,
This strange desire I shall immerse.
A tender touch of feathered quill;
The mournful sun of harvest gloom.
The blissful air as morning chills,
A taste of her in every room.
The pallid wash of autumn sky;
The falling leaves on frozen ground.
This feeling does electrify,
A love so pure is tightly bound.
She whispers as I sleep adrift,
Into the arms of velvet night.
Her psychic waves converse in mist,
This beauty rains a golden light.
Author's Note
Feeling romantic...
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Re. Autumn Love
9th Sep 2018 1:30am
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9th Sep 2018 1:32am
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9th Sep 2018 3:16am
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9th Sep 2018 9:46am
Underneath the darkness, there is a light of passion.
Thanks so much for your comment.
Dark Sun.
Thanks so much for your comment.
Dark Sun.
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Anonymous
9th Sep 2018 8:16am
An exquisite romantic write! Love it!
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9th Sep 2018 9:51am
Casting myself adrift in the sea of love...
Thanks, Ally...you have a beautiful soul.
Dark Sun.
Thanks, Ally...you have a beautiful soul.
Dark Sun.
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9th Sep 2018 5:57pm
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9th Sep 2018 3:48pm
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9th Sep 2018 6:14pm
Thanks, LilD...I like the idea that I can move you with my words...
Dark Sun.
Dark Sun.
Re. Autumn Love
13th Sep 2018 1:59am
Any theme that highlights the seasonal changes and captures nature in the breakdown of words, is just gorgeous !
Love, will always be ceremoniously depicted as divine & eternal. You capture this notion aptly in your write ~ 🌻😎 🎈🤩🌹🌞
Love, will always be ceremoniously depicted as divine & eternal. You capture this notion aptly in your write ~ 🌻😎 🎈🤩🌹🌞
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13th Sep 2018 10:50am
Thanks so much for your beautiful comments...I love the change of seasons in England. I tried to capture this in my poem to someone who inspires me.
Dark Sun.
Dark Sun.
Re. Autumn Love
15th Sep 2018 11:10pm
Takes the reader through from beginning to end with untiring iambic tetrameter which also lends itself to the reliability of seasonal cycles and the experience of trusting love. Really nice.
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15th Sep 2018 11:16pm
Thanks so much for your comments...I've tried to write in pentameter, but I find that my poems flow better with tetrameter. Autumn has come early in England.
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15th Sep 2018 11:23pm
Here in mid-north Portugal it's still hitting 30+degC mid-day - but busy getting in 12 cubic metres of wood ready for winter.
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15th Sep 2018 11:28pm
I've never been to the mainland of Portugal, but I did visit Madeira a few years ago. Beautiful island...stayed in Funchal.
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28th Sep 2018 9:27am
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28th Sep 2018 6:36pm
Thanks Selena. I love the Autumn in England. I really enjoy going for long walks through the woods where I live...watching the falling leaves.
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10th Sep 2019 6:50pm