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149 Unspoken
Riding crosstown on the M14
Storefront
Art installation
A picture that must be taken
To be used later
Here
Storefront
Art installation
A picture that must be taken
To be used later
Here
Published 6th Sep 2018
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As seen from the bus
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6th Sep 2018 1:03pm
6th Sep 2018 1:07pm
Anonymous
6th Sep 2018 1:47pm
There’s something extraordinarily sad about this piece and I’ve read it through a few times and come back to it.
I think it’s the starkness of the image against the words that struck me the most. Like it was always supposed to be seen and communicated in the great circle of things. Isn’t it interesting how certain things catch our attention?
Thank you for sharing.
-M
I think it’s the starkness of the image against the words that struck me the most. Like it was always supposed to be seen and communicated in the great circle of things. Isn’t it interesting how certain things catch our attention?
Thank you for sharing.
-M
7th Sep 2018 00:30am
I'm in transit a lot. Outside sales job. Sometimes you see things that you know you are going to use later. Just gotta wait for the right moment. Turns out it was a lighting conceptual art storefront gig in lower Manhattan. I'm fond of the starkness too.
Good eye Miss
Thx for the great comment
Good eye Miss
Thx for the great comment
6th Sep 2018 1:51pm
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6th Sep 2018 10:50pm
damn it Poet you are a true artist
with the eye for understanding what's important...
this is some of your finest...
love Brenda
with the eye for understanding what's important...
this is some of your finest...
love Brenda
7th Sep 2018 00:33am
