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Cowmentary
Habit is like free grazing cattle
Hmm that grass looks greener
Walk down to the pond
Moo
Addiction is like being corralled
Into the pen for slaughter
Eyes wide, terrified
Moooooo
The cows didn't have much else to say on this topic
Disclaimer: No animals were harmed in the making of this cowmentary
Hmm that grass looks greener
Walk down to the pond
Moo
Addiction is like being corralled
Into the pen for slaughter
Eyes wide, terrified
Moooooo
The cows didn't have much else to say on this topic
Disclaimer: No animals were harmed in the making of this cowmentary
Published 5th Sep 2018
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5th Sep 2018 4:10pm
Anonymous
5th Sep 2018 4:12pm
Medinda,
I'm sorry to say this again, but you're great.
I love your sense of humor.
And you're a writing machine.
Good job.
Matthew.
I'm sorry to say this again, but you're great.
I love your sense of humor.
And you're a writing machine.
Good job.
Matthew.
5th Sep 2018 4:14pm
My brain is a cyclone of insanity. Sometimes my pen has trouble keeping up. Thank you again. Cheers!
5th Sep 2018 4:14pm
LilDragonFly said it best; I’m reminded of a line from an old (and by old I mean from the year I was born) Schwarzenegger movie where his wife says:
“We’re like all the cows out there: stuck! Victims of circumstance!”
Wisdom in hilarity is a potent mix.
“We’re like all the cows out there: stuck! Victims of circumstance!”
Wisdom in hilarity is a potent mix.
5th Sep 2018 4:15pm
5th Sep 2018 4:21pm
Raw Deal; stereotypical Arnold action movie. I’m 99% positive it’s the first movie he did after the original Terminator
5th Sep 2018 4:23pm
5th Sep 2018 4:21pm
Hay Melinda
Holy cow that was funny and clever,
I like the way it was cownterbalanced.
I hope you do not think I am dis -cow-nting your message.
with my cowntless puns
Honestly, I give it consideraBull merit.
Holy cow that was funny and clever,
I like the way it was cownterbalanced.
I hope you do not think I am dis -cow-nting your message.
with my cowntless puns
Honestly, I give it consideraBull merit.
5th Sep 2018 4:23pm
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