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the city moves on ..
like tunnels to the
pedestrians underneath
although in reality bridges
for the trains overhead
whilst under the arches
one quietly acquiesces
to the shuddering forces
of progress ..
Written by
dartford
(Paul S...)
Published 3rd Sep 2018
| Edited 4th Sep 2018
Author's Note
pulling down everything victorian
might bring down a city upon our heads ..
might bring down a city upon our heads ..
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Re. the city moves on ..
4th Sep 2018 00:08am
Progress doen't seem to care much what we think
it goes it's merry way just the same...
results are mixed... Ely
it goes it's merry way just the same...
results are mixed... Ely
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Re: Re. the city moves on ..
5th Sep 2018 00:35am
Re. the city moves on ..
4th Sep 2018 1:37am
Paul, I truly love your work and wish you'd publish a book of these with photographs. I think it would be spectacular.
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Re: Re. the city moves on ..
5th Sep 2018 00:40am
now, now, Vati, you know I'm merely
a hobbyist,
and since you've already
imagined the pictures,
the poems have done what I wished .. :)
a hobbyist,
and since you've already
imagined the pictures,
the poems have done what I wished .. :)
Re. the city moves on ..
4th Sep 2018 2:37pm
'Progress' - such a great idea but now unfortunately corrupted into an ideology where 'technical progress' is confused with 'societal progress'.
I agree with Ahavati - your poems would suit a black&white photo with each one.
I agree with Ahavati - your poems would suit a black&white photo with each one.
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Re: Re. the city moves on ..
5th Sep 2018 00:45am
Re. the city moves on ..
6th Sep 2018 00:29am
Reminds me of Philip Reeve's book 'Mortal Engines'. The cities definitely shudder with a loud heartbeat.
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Re: Re. the city moves on ..
6th Sep 2018 1:37am
Re: Re. the city moves on ..
6th Sep 2018 1:54am
All the noise of out and about droning on and on, but its not to shout about.
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