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first blush
the moonbeams in your sideways smile
held me captive to a lust so great...
I trembled like a little girl
you reached out to touch me...to see if I was real
or just a mirage on your horizon
in my innocence, I shine and then fade
unsure of myself spotlighted by your gaze
reflected in your eyes...
a woman not yet sure of her body
so painfully aware of my womanhood
you push my buttons...opening my pleasure zones
the art of seduction a mystery to me
skilled at little more than coy looks
giggles and stolen kisses in the dark
prowling you with shy smiles...willing you to come after me
taste my first blush while it's ripe on the vine
divinity in the flesh...a woman...a child
and so much more
discover me a book you've yet to read
spread my pristine pages open
and write your own chapter in me
in indelible ink...I am ravished
graffitied walls will say you've been here
leaving your mark on my mind
you mentally pet me...bringing me to full arousal
I ache with the heat of you...rising to greet your hands
my inner woman is unleashed
within a great need, I come undone
your fingers blaze a trail of desire
conquered...by a man of your intellect
I'm wholly seduced and beguiled
you've unlocked my doors
I have to concede I'm in over my head...
in danger of succumbing to your lusts
and drowning in mine...
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Re. first blush
Anonymous
1st Sep 2018 8:30pm
Ah, the beauty of a virgin love and the fantasy that goes with it, with it's build up and the burning desire to be touched and to touch. First love can be beautiful, but when a heart is eternally adolescent, it's a constant first time. Every experience is a note of art that writes history and it only gets stronger and stronger the more it is awaited. You, my sweet poetess, are truly an amazing artist and your passion is that of a virgin soul. I am truly in awe. Lovely write. Love and hugs. J.
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Re: Re. first blush
1st Sep 2018 8:38pm
aw thank you dearest Juvenalis you made me blush with your beautiful comment... I love your insight and vision of this write you are so wise and see so much of what wasn't revealed even to me...
I deeply cherish you beautiful soul 💕
love & hugs...
Brenda
I deeply cherish you beautiful soul 💕
love & hugs...
Brenda
Re. first blush
1st Sep 2018 8:49pm
“Taste my first blush while it’s ripe on the vine...”
Jim Morrison would be proud. The words are electrically charged honey quivering in gleeful anticipation. You describe the first embers of a passionate blaze so well.
Anyone who says they don’t blush at this blush is a goddamned liar
Jim Morrison would be proud. The words are electrically charged honey quivering in gleeful anticipation. You describe the first embers of a passionate blaze so well.
Anyone who says they don’t blush at this blush is a goddamned liar
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Re: Re. first blush
1st Sep 2018 8:53pm
first, let me say how much I love Jim one of my soul's favorites...I'm deeply honored by your comment...beaming and blushing wildly...thank you dearest Taurus...my afternoon is brighter for you and your thoughts ❤
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. first blush
1st Sep 2018 9:15pm
Ah the beauty of innocence, the moment before getting turned out! Nice write.
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Re: Re. first blush
1st Sep 2018 9:34pm
thank you dearest Lyrical One for the read and comment... no one getting turned out though...giggles 😊
love Crim
love Crim
Re. first blush
Anonymous
1st Sep 2018 9:36pm
Brenda.. brilliant as always.. you never fail to deliver.. love you forever, my sister..
Dave
Dave
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1st Sep 2018 9:37pm
Re. first blush
1st Sep 2018 10:06pm
This one shines, Crim. Succumbing to lust is always a potential danger, at least a distraction. You clearly haven't been seduced away from your usual brilliance. "first blush" gives me a rush...
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Re: Re. first blush
1st Sep 2018 10:50pm
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow for seeing the uniqueness of this write... your comment made me glow 😊
love Crim
love Crim
Re. first blush
2nd Sep 2018 2:41am
you have a wonderful gift in your ability to conjure a vision viewed from 'the other side'..a pleasant read Brenda
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Re: Re. first blush
2nd Sep 2018 3:38am
thank you graciously dearest Lawrence for such a beautifully thoughtful comment 🌹
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. first blush
2nd Sep 2018 11:24am
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2nd Sep 2018 4:38pm
Re. first blush
2nd Sep 2018 12:34pm
Fantastic write, great portrayal of a young woman blossoming into full womanhood through her sexuality.
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2nd Sep 2018 4:39pm
Re. first blush
2nd Sep 2018 2:11pm
The deliciousness of virgin flesh...yea, once I was gifted, n am haunted by the memories
still lol...truly, yummy spillage! :)
still lol...truly, yummy spillage! :)
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2nd Sep 2018 4:40pm
Re. first blush
2nd Sep 2018 3:32pm
Such a pleasing, positive vision of those early twinges. A delightful read.
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Re: Re. first blush
2nd Sep 2018 4:41pm
thank you dearest Tender One yes there is something magical in that 💕
love Crim
love Crim
Re. first blush
6th Sep 2018 7:47pm
Such a lovely write to contemplate. Always enjoy your versatility Brenda.
Daniel
Daniel
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Re: Re. first blush
7th Sep 2018 2:31am
thank you graciously dearest Daniel I look forward to your visits 🌹
love Brenda
love Brenda