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Lunch
LUNCH
at the Kentucky state line
at the picnic table refusing to leave the state (of mind)
leaves blowing down
fantasy weekend
the people were treasures I found
at Ruby’s Jewel Box
at the Kentucky state line
at the picnic table refusing to leave the state (of mind)
leaves blowing down
fantasy weekend
the people were treasures I found
at Ruby’s Jewel Box
Author's Note
One never knows what is in the stars when traveling without an agenda.
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30th Aug 2018 7:56pm
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Anonymous
30th Aug 2018 9:29pm
Starrs, you're awesome! Great job! Keep writing!
Matthew.
Matthew.
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30th Aug 2018 9:33pm
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Anonymous
30th Aug 2018 9:57pm
No problem Starrs! You're really nice. Keep writing because I'm going to follow you!(Not in a stalking-type way! Just on this website. lol).
Stay cool!
Stay cool!
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Anonymous
31st Aug 2018 9:16pm
Hi Starrs! (is your name actually Starr? I knew a Starr in High School, not you, but spelled like that).
Where have you been, young lady? You and I, of the PPS(Puny Poem Society), have to stick together! LOL. I actually put 2 more out there today(that landed with a resounding thud, I might add), so now I'm way ahead of you. Get going Kiddo!
TTYS,
Matthew.
Where have you been, young lady? You and I, of the PPS(Puny Poem Society), have to stick together! LOL. I actually put 2 more out there today(that landed with a resounding thud, I might add), so now I'm way ahead of you. Get going Kiddo!
TTYS,
Matthew.
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31st Aug 2018 9:46pm
Hi Matthew,
Yes, my name is Starr. I didn't know what to use as a "pen" name. I wasn't on here much today. Congrats on adding 2 more poems today! I will peruse them and others later. Right now it's almost time to leave work. Have a great weekend!
Yes, my name is Starr. I didn't know what to use as a "pen" name. I wasn't on here much today. Congrats on adding 2 more poems today! I will peruse them and others later. Right now it's almost time to leave work. Have a great weekend!
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Anonymous
31st Aug 2018 10:00pm
Thanks Starr!!! You have a nice weekend, also!
Matthew.
Matthew.
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Nice poem. Starrs. Reminds me of that special fried chicken with 11 herbs & spices...
PPS sounds like some sort of pension scheme Matt. lol. Just thought I'd slip that in. ;-)
PPS sounds like some sort of pension scheme Matt. lol. Just thought I'd slip that in. ;-)
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Anonymous
31st Aug 2018 3:40am
Welcome to DU! Hey Starr’s....how brilliant is this ink......I believe we meet souls in places we wouldn’t think of for reasons......friends are every where just waiting for a “Hello!” Enjoyed this very much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Thank you for your kind words flowergirl! Ruby's Jewel Box was the name of the little AirbNb I stayed at.
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31st Aug 2018 3:47pm
If this is your first poem Starrs, then you have a great future. Nicely observed - welcome to DUP
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31st Aug 2018 9:11pm
Thank you Josh. It was unbelievable how it all came about. I had met a poet on my trip and while I was sitting at the picnic table these words just came to me. I have never written a poem in my life and out of the blue, BAM! Wrote one!
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1st Sep 2018 6:01pm
... take it as a good sign.
Anthologies by Bloodaxe Books are a good place to start.
Anthologies by Bloodaxe Books are a good place to start.
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4th Sep 2018 00:15am
We recommend getting lost every once in a while. Remember before everyone had gps the treasures you could find by getting lost
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24th Sep 2018 00:03am
Absolutely! I do remember being in the car with my dad and he would tell me we were lost and it was so exciting!
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8th Sep 2018 1:20am
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23rd Sep 2018 11:48pm
I saw ... your first poem ... bravo ... I love the short lines ... great work with the crisp line breaks ... it flows so well ...
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23rd Sep 2018 11:59pm
Thank you so much! I just wish I could write another one. I hope it will come in time. Thanks again for reading and commenting Lilgragonfly.
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8th Jan 2019 7:18pm
This spill is pretty darn good
for a << non-Poet (Your descryption of Yourself) >>
enjoyed the ink
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enjoyed the ink
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