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ethereal lover
you mesmerize and soothe in verse
turning every day magical
you titillate while giving me foreplay
is this your intentions or is it just happenstance?
I get it aroused from your clever turn a phrase
imagining your tongue lapping on my exalted grounds
I blush as I say this
but I hope you can feel the internal rhythm
and pulse of this vibe
we have an otherworldly connection
your flavor is being broadcast on every station
telepathically speaks to me
brings me to my peaks
on my knees, before you, I send my kinetic energy
to bring you to full orgasm
swallowing all of you because you're organic
and you taste good mmm
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Re. ethereal lover
24th Aug 2018 2:03am
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24th Aug 2018 2:11am
thank you graciously dearest Dark Sun just a playful write out of my norm...
love Crim
love Crim
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Anonymous
24th Aug 2018 2:16am
Very lustful indeed my dear one. Your words hit the spot every time. Your passion is very powerful. This poem is my flavour. J. :)
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Re: Re. ethereal lover
24th Aug 2018 2:31am
Re. ethereal lover
24th Aug 2018 2:54am
Re: Re. ethereal lover
24th Aug 2018 2:55am
thank you graciously dearest Lawerence so happy you felt this one ❤
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. ethereal lover
24th Aug 2018 6:46am
Could be read as the words of a besotted listener to a sexily lyrical singer, as in:
we have an otherworldly connection
your flavor is being broadcast on every station
telepathically speaks to me
brings me to my peaks
we have an otherworldly connection
your flavor is being broadcast on every station
telepathically speaks to me
brings me to my peaks
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Re: Re. ethereal lover
24th Aug 2018 11:21pm
thank you dearest Solomon you're right it good be read that way...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Crim
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Crim
Re. ethereal lover
Anonymous
24th Aug 2018 9:28am
Ohhhh the imagery penned here !!!
Mmmm indeed
Mmmm indeed
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Re: Re. ethereal lover
24th Aug 2018 11:22pm
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Anonymous
25th Aug 2018 5:32pm
Oh I felt It alright and if you were close enough you would have felt the hell out of it !! Lol 😂🤪😘
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Re: Re. ethereal lover
25th Aug 2018 5:44pm
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Re: Re. ethereal lover
24th Aug 2018 11:23pm
thank you dearest Bender for understanding the poetic rhythm to seduction...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda
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24th Aug 2018 11:23pm
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24th Aug 2018 8:47pm
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Re: Re. ethereal lover
24th Aug 2018 11:24pm
thank you dearest Tim I'm happy my softer romantic side appealed to you...
love Crim
love Crim
Re: Re. ethereal lover
24th Aug 2018 11:25pm
Re. ethereal lover
24th Aug 2018 11:48pm
on my knees, before you, I send my kinetic energy
to bring you to full orgasm
Very deep line, I"m into modalities and harmonic vibrations, so I get it.
Think I'm going to eat some pineapples and grapes tonight. So I taste good
to bring you to full orgasm
Very deep line, I"m into modalities and harmonic vibrations, so I get it.
Think I'm going to eat some pineapples and grapes tonight. So I taste good
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Re: Re. ethereal lover
25th Aug 2018 00:44am
thank you dearest Mystic One yes I believe we send out an energy on a deep level that can be felt and shared by one another... so happy you felt this write...
love Crim
love Crim
Re. ethereal lover
25th Aug 2018 00:39am
Organic, and high in protein, maybe. A turn-on write Crim, erotic as can be...
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Re: Re. ethereal lover
25th Aug 2018 00:45am
giggles at high in protein yes :)
thank you dearest Sir Crow for the smiles today :)
love Crim
thank you dearest Sir Crow for the smiles today :)
love Crim
Re. ethereal lover
1st Sep 2018 3:02pm
An online passion or a vivid dream...? Leaves me wondering, and the emotion and longing across soul and body leaps out from the page; I definitely want to read more like this. Excellent work!
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Re: Re. ethereal lover
this is in answer to how some poets mesmerize in verse... inciting lusts...you ask great questions...I like that 😊
p.s. i've written plenty of erotics in my time they are mostly a lot more graphic though...
love Crim
p.s. i've written plenty of erotics in my time they are mostly a lot more graphic though...
love Crim
Re: Re. ethereal lover
1st Sep 2018 4:21pm
A lot more graphic...? You won’t hear any complaints from me lol. As far as sex and relationships I’ve been a monk for a long time now; those of the taurus need such stimulations, if that’s not too pretentious.
So please...don’t hold back. I’m ready ;)
So please...don’t hold back. I’m ready ;)
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