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Fact of Life
It's always about...
the umbrella without...
so I wonder...
if a parasol...
might not be
more logical...
It seems... you see, that nowadays...
'smore danger in the sun's bright rays...
the umbrella without...
so I wonder...
if a parasol...
might not be
more logical...
It seems... you see, that nowadays...
'smore danger in the sun's bright rays...
Published 21st Aug 2018
| Edited 16th Aug 2019
Author's Note
Dartford's ,"One requires an umbrella"...prompted this piece... Ely
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21st Aug 2018 3:36am
21st Aug 2018 4:00am
22nd Aug 2018 4:59pm
Hi Ange... had a brain fart... the poem has changed... but the first piece isn't gone... it's next door... I will explain later, Hijita... hugs, after I figure it all out...Ely
21st Aug 2018 4:31pm
My grand mother would send me out whether it was raining or not with her words ringing in my ear "it's only water silly boy, be blessed it's god's tears." So I never had an umbarella LOL. I really like this short and too the point plus it conjured up memories of my beloved grandmother :-))))
Thank you for sharing :-))))
Thank you for sharing :-))))
Delighted to delight...
but please bear with me...
I've gone and added to it...
on account of a senior moment...
The original poem is right next door for all to see... so it ain't gone...
Sorry for the screwup... I'm still trying to figure it out...Ely
but please bear with me...
I've gone and added to it...
on account of a senior moment...
The original poem is right next door for all to see... so it ain't gone...
Sorry for the screwup... I'm still trying to figure it out...Ely
