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Burst Me
Sink my toes
Soak these clothes
watch as the flood grows
now rain
rain with conviction
ink drops of contradiction
trickling down my salty skin
Dripping off my paled chin
waiting now
pugnacious thunder
build up
insatiable hunger
feel the temperature dropping under
Be alive
Pulse in my chest
I welcome you
Be my guest
Burst me
I'm thirsty
Soak these clothes
watch as the flood grows
now rain
rain with conviction
ink drops of contradiction
trickling down my salty skin
Dripping off my paled chin
waiting now
pugnacious thunder
build up
insatiable hunger
feel the temperature dropping under
Be alive
Pulse in my chest
I welcome you
Be my guest
Burst me
I'm thirsty
Published 20th Aug 2018
| Edited 22nd Aug 2018
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20th Aug 2018 1:07pm
Not sure if it’s just me since I’m on DU on my phone, but I’m only getting an image and not the actual text of your write.
Either way, welcome to DU!
Either way, welcome to DU!
22nd Aug 2018 8:23pm
Thank you, I'm trying to figure out why that happened but just deleted the pic. Hopefully that helps
23rd Aug 2018 11:05am
Deleting the picture helped. I’m glad I had in opportunity to read your write. Very beautiful, in a way quite peaceful.
Again, welcome to DU.
Again, welcome to DU.
26th Aug 2018 00:32am
Anonymous
1st Oct 2018 3:39am
Welcome to DU.
22nd Feb 2019 6:32am
20th Mar 2019 5:44pm
Anonymous
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