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Poetry of color #3 Blue
Like fresh air on a cloudless day
skies greeting wide with open space
pools of your eyes like oceans deep
awaken in a peaceful place
where Aquamarine dreams are born
in hazy quiet of the ether
creative inspiration comes
from source directly to the seeker
As loyalty and trust reside
on mountain top close to the gods
where eagles soar and wisom calls
and faith in those defies the odds
The queen sits on a sapphire throne
cornflowers in her hair
She holds the truth right in her hand
then throws it in the air
Catch it....
skies greeting wide with open space
pools of your eyes like oceans deep
awaken in a peaceful place
where Aquamarine dreams are born
in hazy quiet of the ether
creative inspiration comes
from source directly to the seeker
As loyalty and trust reside
on mountain top close to the gods
where eagles soar and wisom calls
and faith in those defies the odds
The queen sits on a sapphire throne
cornflowers in her hair
She holds the truth right in her hand
then throws it in the air
Catch it....
Published 17th Aug 2018
| Edited 18th Aug 2018
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
18th Aug 2018 6:06pm
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18th Aug 2018 6:09pm
Thank you Timagination. For some reason the color blue was a challenge. Glad you liked it.
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A.
18th Aug 2018 6:09pm
Awesome Ange.... Beautiful job of illustrating color ... I am awash in gorgeous blues this morning... but special thanks for the cornflower reference... it has always been a favorite of mine... remind me of my sweetie's eyes. Kudos, Mz Ange... Ely
L4... Typo here...*awaken*rether than awoken
L6... cool and quiet haze of ether... I believe you are referring to "the ether", which refers to a clear sky, rather than "ether".
Without the article "ether", refers to a nasty chemical that they use in hospital to anesthetize you. Yuk!
ex. * in the ether's cool and quiet haze*
Nothing wrong that a few pen strokes can't make perfect. hugs, Ely
L4... Typo here...*awaken*rether than awoken
L6... cool and quiet haze of ether... I believe you are referring to "the ether", which refers to a clear sky, rather than "ether".
Without the article "ether", refers to a nasty chemical that they use in hospital to anesthetize you. Yuk!
ex. * in the ether's cool and quiet haze*
Nothing wrong that a few pen strokes can't make perfect. hugs, Ely
18th Aug 2018 10:10pm
19th Aug 2018 3:03pm
Anonymous
19th Aug 2018 3:06pm
My favourite (color) so far...just bloody magical "She holds the truth right in her hand
then throws it in the air "...just perfect🤗🤗🤗
then throws it in the air "...just perfect🤗🤗🤗
19th Aug 2018 3:10pm
19th Aug 2018 4:12pm
Wonderful diving into color ... I love blue ... thanks for taking me with you ...
19th Aug 2018 4:18pm
Thank you for stopping by LilD....missed your presence and contribution. Good to see you back.
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
19th Aug 2018 6:01pm
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19th Aug 2018 6:05pm
Yes, colors are symbols....they affect our feeling and in the old traditions stand for different qualities in the essence of beeing. I try to capture a bit of it all.
24th Aug 2018 1:26am
Such a cute and uplifting poem, Angela! I loved the easy format it reads with and the descriptions you've used.
Thanks for participating in my competition!
Thanks for participating in my competition!
24th Aug 2018 3:47am
