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The audience left
Once deprived
now depraved
by disturbing images enslaved
You hide inside
no love you show
predatory on the go
Never forgiving
can not heal
thinking you've got great appeal
behind all that
you poor old fuck
is just a gambler out of luck
The curtain falls
the seats are empty
now there is nothing
where once was plenty
now depraved
by disturbing images enslaved
You hide inside
no love you show
predatory on the go
Never forgiving
can not heal
thinking you've got great appeal
behind all that
you poor old fuck
is just a gambler out of luck
The curtain falls
the seats are empty
now there is nothing
where once was plenty
Published 8th Aug 2018
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8th Aug 2018 00:18am
8th Aug 2018 00:36am
Thank you SatIn....we all met that character at some time or another I suppose.
8th Aug 2018 00:30am
People go to some very strange places... and if we're not careful...
they will carry us with them and suck the life out of us ... if we let them
Much as we may wish, we cannot bring them back...
they have to follow their path and find their own way...
And with luck they will return ... transformed for the better. *JĒ
I think you expressed this very well indeed... nicely done, and well constructed. Ely
they will carry us with them and suck the life out of us ... if we let them
Much as we may wish, we cannot bring them back...
they have to follow their path and find their own way...
And with luck they will return ... transformed for the better. *JĒ
I think you expressed this very well indeed... nicely done, and well constructed. Ely
8th Aug 2018 00:37am
Healthy distance is what I apply. Thanks for your read and positive feedback Ely.
10th Aug 2018 3:42am
I like your work, I've read it over at least three times now and find it very.. relatable
10th Aug 2018 5:44am
