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Middle~Earth〽️
Swathed in drifting mist and fires' smoke,
Thunderous drums as daylight fades.
Songs of ancient clans drown whispers
Of their women's woolen skirt hems,
While the dance builds, a moon eclipsed,
Blood rises this summer solstice.
A melodic cauldron is stirred,
Dulcimer strings and fidd’ler's bow,
Quickened bravado of their feet
Sway bare across long wooden planks.
Black-wing’d souls spin o’er village roofs,
Their calls carry the hearts & minds
Of warriors in the clannish hills,
Forging new swords, bathing the blades
In the falls’ crest cascading down
Toward the rolling emerald valley,
Where dragons, circ’ling low, await
The feast they know will come tonight.
Starlit eyes stare long at their flight,
Yearning a journey ‘cross the sea.
Where friends seek, darkness is at bay,
Wizards, unaware of night's crawl,
Travel through ages of magic
To summer nights, when fireworks
Shaped as the shadows of dragons,
Are the only sorcery seen.
Thunderous drums as daylight fades.
Songs of ancient clans drown whispers
Of their women's woolen skirt hems,
While the dance builds, a moon eclipsed,
Blood rises this summer solstice.
A melodic cauldron is stirred,
Dulcimer strings and fidd’ler's bow,
Quickened bravado of their feet
Sway bare across long wooden planks.
Black-wing’d souls spin o’er village roofs,
Their calls carry the hearts & minds
Of warriors in the clannish hills,
Forging new swords, bathing the blades
In the falls’ crest cascading down
Toward the rolling emerald valley,
Where dragons, circ’ling low, await
The feast they know will come tonight.
Starlit eyes stare long at their flight,
Yearning a journey ‘cross the sea.
Where friends seek, darkness is at bay,
Wizards, unaware of night's crawl,
Travel through ages of magic
To summer nights, when fireworks
Shaped as the shadows of dragons,
Are the only sorcery seen.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 2nd Aug 2018
Author's Note
For the DUP competition “Lord of the Poems: the Fellowship of the DU”, hosted by LunasChild8.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re: Re. Middle~Earth
2nd Aug 2018 4:18pm
Thank you so kindly, poet Bender... I’m more than glad how you stepped into the vision and caught sight of its life.🦇
Re. Middle~Earth
2nd Aug 2018 3:54pm
Fantastic poem, Jade! You've captured the magic of Middle-Earth, from the joy and uncertainly of journeying across the sea, to the dread and evil of the dragons of the dark lord.
Definitely upload this to my competition. Brilliant write, once again!
Definitely upload this to my competition. Brilliant write, once again!
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Re: Re. Middle~Earth
2nd Aug 2018 4:24pm
Thank you gracious Luna... I leave now to go and breathless bring my offering upon the Wizard’s steed!
Re. Middle~Earth
2nd Aug 2018 6:03pm
I'm not a Baggins but I loved this. First the dragons, then the fireworks bring things down (or up) to Earth. Fine work!
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Re: Re. Middle~Earth
3rd Aug 2018 6:07am
I thank you, my friend, for the way you’ve approached my piece of a world we live atop, between, below.
Re. Middle~Earth
2nd Aug 2018 6:32pm
Re: Re. Middle~Earth
3rd Aug 2018 4:55am
Re. Middle~Earth
Anonymous
2nd Aug 2018 9:34pm
Congratulations on the big 500.
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Re: Re. Middle~Earth
3rd Aug 2018 5:57am
Omgosh that’s right! Thanks for the reminder... and the thoughtful congrats.
Re. Middle~Earth
3rd Aug 2018 1:03am
you should take up painting
damn cause you're so good in painting pictures
damn cause you're so good in painting pictures
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Re: Re. Middle~Earth
3rd Aug 2018 4:51am
It’s ironic you would say that, poet,(and thank you)... because I started as an artist (and I’m still one to this day) before I became a writer/poet!👩🏻🎨
Re: Re. Middle~Earth
4th Aug 2018 3:32am
Re: Re. Middle~Earth
4th Aug 2018 11:51am
Re. Middle~Earth
3rd Aug 2018 5:20pm
Such magical imagery in visions and sound Jade. Brilliant verse dear friend!!!
JJ
JJ
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Re: Re. Middle~Earth
4th Aug 2018 00:01am
Hello, Joe! Good to see you, and thank you so much for sharing your enjoyment of my work with me!
Re. Middle~Earth
3rd Aug 2018 11:12pm
What wonderful images from such considered words, lovely and powerful.
Excellent work, Jade.
RL awaits
Tommy
Excellent work, Jade.
RL awaits
Tommy
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Re: Re. Middle~Earth
4th Aug 2018 00:10am
Gosh, Tommy, I’m so glad to learn of your appreciation & enjoyment of this particular piece & subject; I’m thrilled!
RL gratitude〽️
Jade tiger🐾
RL gratitude〽️
Jade tiger🐾
Re. Middle~Earth
4th Aug 2018 7:38am
Re: Re. Middle~Earth
4th Aug 2018 11:50am
Thank you for stopping by, Poet, and for your appreciation, and...
Warm welcome to the DEEP.
Warm welcome to the DEEP.
Re. Middle~Earth
4th Aug 2018 6:47pm
Most definitely the winning entry in that competition. Excellent piece Jade.
John
John
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