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Polaris
Last night I rolled the dice
the dream was just nice
your promise without price
I have feelings of paradise
I center you in my world
like Polaris the brightest pearl
steadily fixes high at the curl
at the place my chest furls
You are my guiding star
navigating as I sail afar
no matter how far apart
you lead me back to the start
As I am lost on the earth
not knowing how much I’m worth
priceless or just a dearth
you tell me how good my efforts
The cruise may tremble
steps may cause trouble
but your lead with prudence
I won’t get lost in the guidance
I feel safe sailing along the rail
which you create for me to rotate
surrounding you is my wish
cause I’m the sailor in celestial sea
I'll be strong in your light
the dream was just nice
your promise without price
I have feelings of paradise
I center you in my world
like Polaris the brightest pearl
steadily fixes high at the curl
at the place my chest furls
You are my guiding star
navigating as I sail afar
no matter how far apart
you lead me back to the start
As I am lost on the earth
not knowing how much I’m worth
priceless or just a dearth
you tell me how good my efforts
The cruise may tremble
steps may cause trouble
but your lead with prudence
I won’t get lost in the guidance
I feel safe sailing along the rail
which you create for me to rotate
surrounding you is my wish
cause I’m the sailor in celestial sea
I'll be strong in your light
Author's Note
you make me strong my love
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Re. Polaris
31st Jul 2018 4:39am
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31st Jul 2018 4:46am
Thank you Lawrence. Your encouraging words really mean something...
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. Polaris
31st Jul 2018 8:04am
Brava Jasmine! As always beautifully written and romantic. I love the image this passage conjures:
"Polaris the brightest pearl
steadily fixes high at the curl
at the place my chest furls"
"Polaris the brightest pearl
steadily fixes high at the curl
at the place my chest furls"
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Re: Re. Polaris
31st Jul 2018 3:45pm
Thank you Bob for the read and the kind words. Really appreciate your support.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. Polaris
31st Jul 2018 9:05am
sweet sweet rhyming..always make the boat float down so smooth...
"You are my guiding star
navigating as I sail afar
no matter how far apart
you lead me back to the start"
love the astro-poetics...the sky is a blanket...we throw off the sheet...
love ya
Jeff
"You are my guiding star
navigating as I sail afar
no matter how far apart
you lead me back to the start"
love the astro-poetics...the sky is a blanket...we throw off the sheet...
love ya
Jeff
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Re: Re. Polaris
31st Jul 2018 4:10pm
Dear Jeff, glad you love it...someone is just like the Pole Star in my life...
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. Polaris
31st Jul 2018 3:44pm
Re: Re. Polaris
Dear TIG, thank you so much for the nice feedback. Always enjoy your visit...You are one of the spiritual people I know.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
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31st Jul 2018 4:18pm
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Re: Re. Polaris
31st Jul 2018 5:22pm
Dear Danny, thank you so much for the read and the RL add. Love your visit as usual.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. Polaris
2nd Aug 2018 5:38pm
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2nd Aug 2018 7:58pm
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2018 8:19pm
An enjoyable poem, Jasmine.
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Re: Re. Polaris
3rd Aug 2018 4:47pm
Thank you Andy for the nice comment. Always appreciate your visit.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Anonymous
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10th Aug 2018 5:05pm
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Re: Re. Polaris
10th Aug 2018 5:16pm
Thank you Bender for stopping by and sharing your thought.
Nice to meet you on DUP!
love
Jasmine
Nice to meet you on DUP!
love
Jasmine
Re. Polaris
10th Aug 2018 9:52pm
very beautiful i love your choices of words they are heartfelt, endearing. You write so sincerely from the heart
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Re: Re. Polaris
11th Aug 2018 1:39am
Thank you my dear friend. Yeah it's what I feel for the pole star, the God or the person...
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. Polaris
11th Aug 2018 8:09am
Beautiful Love tribute - love the rhyming scheme - so well written :-)))
excellent ink :-))))))))))))
excellent ink :-))))))))))))
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Re: Re. Polaris
11th Aug 2018 8:20am
Thank you David for the nice feedback. Love your visit and glad you thought it's beautiful.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re: Re. Polaris
19th Aug 2018 5:44am
Thank you for commenting on this.Truly glad to have your visit dear Again.
Love
Jasmine
Love
Jasmine
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Anonymous
23rd Aug 2018 3:44am
Hey Rose.......how beautifully is your soft voice here.......read like a whisper of luv and felt thru the heart.......stunning ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Polaris
23rd Aug 2018 5:20am
Thank you my beautiful friend. Always enjoy and appreciate your visit. You should know how much I love you....
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine