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A Bit of Trust
She was suffering certain qualms
Regarding the use of leather straps
Or strict restraint with padded cuffs
A few tools that she felt were traps
Master demanded that she obey
And wear whatever he so chose
Don all restraints in his "boudoir"
And she will get a single rose
But she still quivered with dismay
Not certain of his "boudoir" lab
No comfort on his tricked-out bed
But, what the hell, she'll take a stab
She decides that he must have his way
And gives into his most sacred will
If she can take the discipline
She'll trust in his most practiced skill
Regarding the use of leather straps
Or strict restraint with padded cuffs
A few tools that she felt were traps
Master demanded that she obey
And wear whatever he so chose
Don all restraints in his "boudoir"
And she will get a single rose
But she still quivered with dismay
Not certain of his "boudoir" lab
No comfort on his tricked-out bed
But, what the hell, she'll take a stab
She decides that he must have his way
And gives into his most sacred will
If she can take the discipline
She'll trust in his most practiced skill
Published 27th Jul 2018
Author's Note
More bondage, something I have never tried. Just trying to wing it again with fantasy.
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Anonymous
27th Jul 2018 9:52pm
I love that subject in erotic poems. Best read ever!
So glad you enjoyed this, Catman. Thanks for the kind words. And thanks for the RL entry. That made my day!
Anonymous
28th Jul 2018 12:00pm
It's a pleasure!
27th Jul 2018 10:13pm
The art of bondage is as well a use of vocabulary , word usage ,
tonality , and magnetic voice , as that is part of the dominants domain ;
A study of bondage terms , is a good start , yet you and I know ,
in journalism , full immersion in the story yields the best results ;
Cuffs Locked Or In The Stocks
In The Barred Cage Or In The Box
Dungeon Bound It Was Her Sounds
As I Touched Her Moistened Mound
And Her Pleas Or Her Begging Please
As I Teased And Forced Her To Her Knees
( from memory )
Experience *is* the Poet's best teacher !
( Try It ! )
tonality , and magnetic voice , as that is part of the dominants domain ;
A study of bondage terms , is a good start , yet you and I know ,
in journalism , full immersion in the story yields the best results ;
Cuffs Locked Or In The Stocks
In The Barred Cage Or In The Box
Dungeon Bound It Was Her Sounds
As I Touched Her Moistened Mound
And Her Pleas Or Her Begging Please
As I Teased And Forced Her To Her Knees
( from memory )
Experience *is* the Poet's best teacher !
( Try It ! )
27th Jul 2018 10:35pm
27th Jul 2018 10:38pm
You can't be any older than me , my friend...
I am 64 , and still learning new tricks...
Literally , and figuratively !
I am 64 , and still learning new tricks...
Literally , and figuratively !
28th Jul 2018 8:36pm
Anonymous
28th Jul 2018 2:06am
Wowzers Crow.......I was looking for a bedtime story.......lucky me found this......wheeeeee.......luv the images this creates......keep getting better......purple luv & hugs xo :)
28th Jul 2018 2:12am
28th Jul 2018 6:26am
If shes into such things... More power to her. Wow...but I don't like pain in love making though. Good write though Crowfly.
28th Jul 2018 8:37pm
Just a wayward fantasy, Grace, well outside my experience. I doubt that pain is really much of an aphrodisiac.
28th Jul 2018 8:50pm
Actually , CrowFly , some truth here :
In BDSM , one of the "goals" , is through
pain , to put a person in a heightened state
of arousal , where cells are stimulated , blood
rises to the surface , and the entire skin becomes
a sensory organ , where the slightest touch , after
the initial pain , brings utmost pleasure ;
Spanking / whipping is one example of this , yet
by far not the only one ;
Altered states may be achieved by proper application
of pain , and just like poetry , there are literally "different
beats" which change mindframes ;
BDSM , is a "high art" in the "proper hands" ...
( speaking from a dominant's experience )
In BDSM , one of the "goals" , is through
pain , to put a person in a heightened state
of arousal , where cells are stimulated , blood
rises to the surface , and the entire skin becomes
a sensory organ , where the slightest touch , after
the initial pain , brings utmost pleasure ;
Spanking / whipping is one example of this , yet
by far not the only one ;
Altered states may be achieved by proper application
of pain , and just like poetry , there are literally "different
beats" which change mindframes ;
BDSM , is a "high art" in the "proper hands" ...
( speaking from a dominant's experience )
28th Jul 2018 9:08pm
No experience with this at all, I fear. I do understand that pleasure and pain can be closely related. I've never even come close to being a dominant, and it's not in my nature to be submissive. I admire you for the worlds of eroticism you have explored.
Anonymous
28th Jul 2018 12:12pm
Aah just perfectly written! Pure sensual erotic write! Loved it!
28th Jul 2018 8:38pm
Anonymous
28th Jul 2018 8:41pm
This write deserved all great comments!
28th Jul 2018 4:14pm
Trust, goes along way, in terms of exploration and longevity !
Fantasy, is oft the precursor to such.
Enjoy ~ 🤩🌹😎🎈🌞🌻
Fantasy, is oft the precursor to such.
Enjoy ~ 🤩🌹😎🎈🌞🌻
28th Jul 2018 8:40pm
Very well said. An eloquent comment! No surprise though, given the sophistication of your writes.
