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Overloading
Wish I had a cosmos brain
so it could carry a great deal of grain
Unfortunately
it’s just normal
maybe a bit small
therefore it’s stuck
like rush hour traffic
It jams so badly
paralyzed my poetry
so it could carry a great deal of grain
Unfortunately
it’s just normal
maybe a bit small
therefore it’s stuck
like rush hour traffic
It jams so badly
paralyzed my poetry
Published 27th Jul 2018
| Edited 2nd Aug 2018
Author's Note
Oh my life's so challenging....
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27th Jul 2018 3:36am
No no Rosejasmine, your poetry is fully mobile!! Poetry has to be a natural flow anyway. I am sorry for your challenging life, but your brain is cosmic and universal.
27th Jul 2018 3:53am
Thank you my dear friend, at least I can breathe...your encouragement means a lot =:)
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
27th Jul 2018 12:49pm
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27th Jul 2018 12:28pm
27th Jul 2018 4:12pm
Tap into all that love in your spirit, and we will all feel it through your words!
27th Jul 2018 4:18pm
I will try to when I still have a breath...
Thank you TIG for the uplifting words.
love
Jasmine
Thank you TIG for the uplifting words.
love
Jasmine
27th Jul 2018 4:21pm
27th Jul 2018 4:44pm
When I sit back, I only feel my head spinning....but thank you for the suggestion...
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
