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LUCKY GUY
Into the ballroom you sneak
tardy for this formal affair
at the lectern the MC,
beginning to speak,
stutters then pauses to stare
All men’s eyes.
that can safely observe.
are completely transfixed
on your every curve
Wearing your favorite
little black dress
your magnificent body
revealed more than less
Very aware of each
wandering glance
you decide to put on a show
as you weave between the tables
sexy hips sway to and fro
Mouths agape when you pass
mesmerized by your red lips
forming a seductive smile
and oh so tempted
to touch your round ass
Neckline plunging
barely concealing
your voluptuous breasts
where between each orb
if given the chance
every male in the place,
and perhaps a few women,
would bury their face
I know many are dreaming
of your shapely legs spread
displaying the juicy prize
discovered in between
your creamy white thighs
Arriving at last
at your assigned spot
I rise to pull out your chair
you whisper sweetly
“sorry I’m late”
“no, you’re just on time
and you look great”
As I return to my seat
I seem to hear a collective sigh
as if every man in the room
was saying “what a lucky guy!”
tardy for this formal affair
at the lectern the MC,
beginning to speak,
stutters then pauses to stare
All men’s eyes.
that can safely observe.
are completely transfixed
on your every curve
Wearing your favorite
little black dress
your magnificent body
revealed more than less
Very aware of each
wandering glance
you decide to put on a show
as you weave between the tables
sexy hips sway to and fro
Mouths agape when you pass
mesmerized by your red lips
forming a seductive smile
and oh so tempted
to touch your round ass
Neckline plunging
barely concealing
your voluptuous breasts
where between each orb
if given the chance
every male in the place,
and perhaps a few women,
would bury their face
I know many are dreaming
of your shapely legs spread
displaying the juicy prize
discovered in between
your creamy white thighs
Arriving at last
at your assigned spot
I rise to pull out your chair
you whisper sweetly
“sorry I’m late”
“no, you’re just on time
and you look great”
As I return to my seat
I seem to hear a collective sigh
as if every man in the room
was saying “what a lucky guy!”
Published 26th Jul 2018
| Edited 5th Mar 2020
Author's Note
I wrote this piece on what probably was a cold November day in 2013.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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26th Jul 2018 10:35pm
A turn on for sure! I see by your note that this is five years old. You had vast skill even then, and enormous good fortune.
26th Jul 2018 10:54pm
Thank you Sir Crow! Got get sexy every once in awhile to keep the syrup flowing. I appreciate your comment very much.
Anonymous
26th Jul 2018 10:37pm
Excellent eros! Pure perfection ! Love it!
26th Jul 2018 10:52pm
Grazie il mio amico, Juvenalis66. I am glad you see the eros in the piece. I hesitated posting this because I'm not usually this explicit. I am encouraged by your comment.
Anonymous
26th Jul 2018 11:20pm
It's truly an excellent piece. Bravo. Keep up with it.
Anonymous
26th Jul 2018 10:56pm
Enjoyed this. Much. There's always a lady in a little black dress in every corner of my mind.
26th Jul 2018 11:03pm
LOL! Not a bad permanent fixture I'd say. Thank you Rob, I appreciate your enthusiasms...now I'm off to search for a brain dwelling, black dress clad beauty.
26th Jul 2018 11:26pm
Clearly an enviable woman. Favourite lines:
I know many are dreaming
of your shapely legs spread
displaying the juicy prize
discovered in between
your creamy white thighs
I know many are dreaming
of your shapely legs spread
displaying the juicy prize
discovered in between
your creamy white thighs
26th Jul 2018 11:32pm
Thank you Solomon. That, to me, is the most controversial stanza because I don't want to seem disrespectful...I am illustrating the carnal mind of most of the male species...and there's no denying the beauty there. I appreciate your comment!
27th Jul 2018 6:35am
A new poetic soundbite you have conjured up:
The juicy prize
Between her thighs
The juicy prize
Between her thighs
27th Jul 2018 11:40am
27th Jul 2018 1:42pm
31st Jan 2021 9:01pm
"What a lucky guy!"
I love this fantasy and it is written with it's descriptives purposeful and intended to entice with a hint of romance as well as a kinda cliffhanger with possible potential... lol
Does he score the babe?? IS that his date or...?
I assume Ohhh hell yeah...
Lmao...
I love it.
Thanks for sharing
💋🐻💋🐻💋
🌹
xo
I love this fantasy and it is written with it's descriptives purposeful and intended to entice with a hint of romance as well as a kinda cliffhanger with possible potential... lol
Does he score the babe?? IS that his date or...?
I assume Ohhh hell yeah...
Lmao...
I love it.
Thanks for sharing
💋🐻💋🐻💋
🌹
xo
31st Jan 2021 9:55pm
I love where your mind takes with this one. Blue. I never thought of the mystrtious angles before. As a poet it thrills me when more stories are born from my seed verse. That you dear BBS💋🐻💋🐻
