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my switchblade told me to do it
black fuck yous sent out on a wavelength
I hope this idea was beamed into your brain
cause my demon nabbed it before you could write it
wrap your head in tin foil
and put it in the microwave on high
it should blast all your neurons
so the boogeyman can't see inside
your eyes may pop a little
if this happens you are having a adverse reaction
to the truth you're witnessing
do you feel my rage?
if not you didn't follow my instructions
now practice after me
I do believe in ghosts
I do believe in ghosts
I do believe in ghosts
you should be back safely on the ward now
who the hell let you get on a computer anyhow?
madness traveling across the internet
beamed into peoples memories
is this smack down
fuck why did I let you piss me off today?
usually i'm evil lite
you got me wanting to pop out your eyes
for even looking at my stuff sideways
if you think I took your innuendo's badly
damn right I did
I'm no plago
I don't need the maggoty thoughts
crawling on the dog turd you layed outside
at this point I'm actually feeling bad for you
cause you unleashed the bitch
and she's coming for you
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Re. my switchblade told me to do it
20th Jul 2018 10:18pm
I do believe in ghosts, and I can feel your rage here. I have a switchblade that talks to me too. Fine work as always!
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Re: Re. my switchblade told me to do it
20th Jul 2018 10:20pm
Re. my switchblade told me to do it
20th Jul 2018 10:26pm
wrap your head in tin foil
and put it in the microwave on high <—- OMG! I died of laughter!!!
it should blast all your neurons
so the boogeyman can't see inside
Very funny story Crim! You’re so creative !
Hugs Zazzles ❤️
and put it in the microwave on high <—- OMG! I died of laughter!!!
it should blast all your neurons
so the boogeyman can't see inside
Very funny story Crim! You’re so creative !
Hugs Zazzles ❤️
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Re: Re. my switchblade told me to do it
20th Jul 2018 10:28pm
lol thank you Jackie your giggles brought me some :)
so happy to bring you laughs today...
love you beautiful...
big hugs Brenda
so happy to bring you laughs today...
love you beautiful...
big hugs Brenda
Re. my switchblade told me to do it
20th Jul 2018 10:34pm
Re: Re. my switchblade told me to do it
20th Jul 2018 10:35pm
Re. my switchblade told me to do it
Anonymous
20th Jul 2018 10:44pm
Fuck Bren. You should have written that in the blood from the most steel of blades. I love how you channel anger into poetry.
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Re: Re. my switchblade told me to do it
21st Jul 2018 1:30am
thank you graciously dearest Rob for such a great response on this write...
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. my switchblade told me to do it
20th Jul 2018 10:52pm
Re: Re. my switchblade told me to do it
21st Jul 2018 1:31am
Re. my switchblade told me to do it
20th Jul 2018 11:05pm
Just make sure that you don’t press the popcorn button On the microwave as it’s just a couple minute long. Hey this Shakespearean Sweet wants to get on your romantic side.
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Re: Re. my switchblade told me to do it
21st Jul 2018 1:32am
thank you graciously Shakespearan afraid that spot is already reserved...
love Crim
love Crim
Re: Re. my switchblade told me to do it
21st Jul 2018 2:44am
You know what I mean, I don’t want to end up in the microwave is all I’m asking, lol
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Re: Re. my switchblade told me to do it
21st Jul 2018 2:46am
Re. my switchblade told me to do it
Anonymous
21st Jul 2018 1:30am
Brenda.. goddamn, feel the power of your poetic slap.. nobody fucks with the queen.. without falling to her poisonous sting.. bowing to you beautiful one.. love..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. my switchblade told me to do it
21st Jul 2018 1:32am
Re. my switchblade told me to do it
21st Jul 2018 2:06am
Shit, I come by for a visit n you got me
So stunned by the venom here that I nearly pissed myself lol...hot, raw, twisted anger spill, lord help that FOOL! lol
So stunned by the venom here that I nearly pissed myself lol...hot, raw, twisted anger spill, lord help that FOOL! lol
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Re: Re. my switchblade told me to do it
21st Jul 2018 2:07am