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wildflower dreams and visions
while searching the fields
seeking my wildflowers tonight
I came across a rare beauty
who helped me find solace
I sought the sun in my mind
at first, I was evaded
I thought the fairies were at play
withholding their magic
then you smiled and in came the sunshine
my mind was at ease instantly
gentle rays caressed and my thoughts slowed
nature prevailed, I was transported
I see us as little girls singing songs
running through the green, picking daisies
decorating each other's hair
we're so very happy
it was hot today
here a cooling breeze
kisses our sweating brows
giving us sweet dreams
we climb the tree of knowing
and whisper secrets to one another
I see a gifted storyteller
the world sees a rival
with hushed tones, we lift each other
so the winds carry our stories
and then sprinkles them down below
on the very petals of the flowers, it's now written
our little girl dreams of the future
we are the keepers over stories and visions
the way to this magical realm hidden
I lost my way there
you came in with your heart
and showed me the path back to inspiration
Author's Note
for a poetess who brought the sunshine and flowers in tonight :)
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20th Jul 2018 7:37am
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20th Jul 2018 10:16am
What a gorgeous picture you paint with words...
The summer always brings back memories of love...like the time I fooled around with a girl in the meadows...she was very sweet and innocent...my first love.
Dark Sun.
The summer always brings back memories of love...like the time I fooled around with a girl in the meadows...she was very sweet and innocent...my first love.
Dark Sun.
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20th Jul 2018 12:17pm
thank you graciously dearest Dark Sun for showing love on this write and for sharing your own beautiful time in nature with a cherished girl...
love Crim
love Crim
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A beautifully serendipitous moment that embraces the senses in our discovery...
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20th Jul 2018 12:18pm
thank you beautiful Jade for such a lovely poetic comment and indeed it is :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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20th Jul 2018 12:14pm
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20th Jul 2018 12:20pm
aw thank you dearest Poet for showing love on this write :)
you know I sat for two hours trying to project myself into nature and couldn't do it...
until a lovely poetess came in with a smile and I was transported there :)
love you...
Brenda
you know I sat for two hours trying to project myself into nature and couldn't do it...
until a lovely poetess came in with a smile and I was transported there :)
love you...
Brenda
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I've been a little blocked lately myself, can't find my tender, but as discussed, sometimes you have to wait till it finds you ....
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Re: Re. wildflower dreams and visions
20th Jul 2018 1:02pm
yes sigh you're right poet I was all bound up with tension I wanted to conjure beauty and she came and found me....
love you...
love you...
Re. wildflower dreams and visions
20th Jul 2018 12:21pm
Lovely love poem ... soothing ... hopeful ... like warm sunshine on my shoulders ... bravo my dear poetess ...
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20th Jul 2018 12:23pm
thank you beautiful Dragonfly for the love on this write i'm happy it made you feel like it did me :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. wildflower dreams and visions
Very sweet, pure, well done.
By the way I have a secret in my next poem to be a revealing or should I say unvealing
By the way I have a secret in my next poem to be a revealing or should I say unvealing
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Re: Re. wildflower dreams and visions
20th Jul 2018 1:13pm
thank you graciously dearest Shakespearan says smiling I can't wait :)
love Crim
love Crim
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Anonymous
20th Jul 2018 9:28pm
We all need
a bit of
sun`shine &
poetic flowers
to brighten up
our darkness ...
a lucky sister, she is;
beautiful Ode
I love you, my Queen Bren
~Devlin
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Re: Re. wildflower dreams and visions
20th Jul 2018 9:31pm
thank you my beautiful Queen
yeah on my darkest days I just sit
and reach, pushing past the darkness
to these places..
my gut was in knots...
it was needed relief...
love you beautiful...
Brenda
yeah on my darkest days I just sit
and reach, pushing past the darkness
to these places..
my gut was in knots...
it was needed relief...
love you beautiful...
Brenda
Re. wildflower dreams and visions
20th Jul 2018 11:05pm
Love how you handle nature, Crim, and the nostalgia of running through the fields, flowers in hair. Sweet memories, and even sweeter poetry.
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