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the medication
the one i started
the one that started working
too expensive
i can't afford it
welcome
welcome to the USA
no job
the fuckers
they fire me
the fuckers
they don't trust me
and
they ARE right
no meds
no meds to make it better
no meds to make it right
to make me
less
less of a fucking screw-up
less of a fucking something
so
i is me
and me's not working
me
not working again
fuck
yeah
tell me something i don't know
good
great
yeah
wonderful
another cup of coffee
another weak-assed story
"YOU"
"GET OVER HERE"
"GET IN THE FUCKING LINE"
- - -
the medication
the one i started
the one that started working
too expensive
i can't afford it
welcome
welcome to the USA
no job
the fuckers
they fire me
the fuckers
they don't trust me
and
they ARE right
no meds
no meds to make it better
no meds to make it right
to make me
less
less of a fucking screw-up
less of a fucking something
so
i is me
and me's not working
me
not working again
fuck
yeah
tell me something i don't know
good
great
yeah
wonderful
another cup of coffee
another weak-assed story
"YOU"
"GET OVER HERE"
"GET IN THE FUCKING LINE"
- - -
Published 23rd Oct 2011
| Edited 24th Oct 2011
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23rd Oct 2011 6:17am
Wow I can really relate to this poem..i'm schizo affective and have to take the crap samples not being able to afford the good stuff..I feel for you..wishing it gets better for you..Crim
yeah, no exotic suffering... just the same fucking suffering as the rest of the world
23rd Oct 2011 12:56pm
The flow is perfect, spot on. It is impossible to read without following the spurt of the protagonist. Nice and necessary.
24th Oct 2011 2:47am
28th Oct 2011 10:59am
There's blue sky
at the end of every storm, kid.
A sparkle in the eye
when all the tears have dried
and however much it rains
you can always find
a bigger puddle to jump in
where the shit sticks
for longer than it ever did before--
good job you have frogs legs.
28th Oct 2011 9:26pm
25th Jan 2012 4:47pm
now
eye'm bein paid
a pit
tance to stay'way
fr'om
thee normal workethic paradigm---
a better way to kill
:::::::::
most glad to find ye, or: did you say ye founded me?
no 'score' t'be keepin////////////dkzk
eye'm bein paid
a pit
tance to stay'way
fr'om
thee normal workethic paradigm---
a better way to kill
:::::::::
most glad to find ye, or: did you say ye founded me?
no 'score' t'be keepin////////////dkzk
Anonymous
2nd May 2012 3:22pm
The system is screwed up. I find your write to be exactly correct as to the way this country is run. People need there meds for whatever reason to be able to hold or even get a job. It is a mess. Love the last line "GET IN THE FUCKING LINE"
That line is huge and getting bigger!!!! Hope things change for you and anyone else affected by this same situation. Thank you for sharing.
That line is huge and getting bigger!!!! Hope things change for you and anyone else affected by this same situation. Thank you for sharing.
6th Jul 2012 8:08am
Yes, sir! Oh, sorry, I just assumed I was supposed to do everything your words tell me too. Quite like watching a pot boil, it doesn't, and then when you made me turn around, it overflowed. Erratic totality, same ol' Big Daddy Ray. :D
28th Sep 2013 4:39pm
The LINE.
I like it.
Unemployment line,
and/or meds line @ the state hospital.
Poetic line
(sometimes can't get into it- talking about writing,)
sometimes wont get into it (reading).
Voices guiding me:
"YOU"
"GET OVER HERE"
"GET IN THE FUCKING LINE" !
I like it.
Unemployment line,
and/or meds line @ the state hospital.
Poetic line
(sometimes can't get into it- talking about writing,)
sometimes wont get into it (reading).
Voices guiding me:
"YOU"
"GET OVER HERE"
"GET IN THE FUCKING LINE" !
6th Oct 2013 10:55am
