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we submit into evidence item 356
u didnt see my carpet burn
under my fingers it feels like
the edge of a guillotine
i hang about waiting
to feel bad about it
wanted to tell u
forgot my eyelash there
under my fingers it feels like
the edge of a guillotine
i hang about waiting
to feel bad about it
wanted to tell u
forgot my eyelash there
Published 19th Jun 2018
| Edited 22nd Jun 2018
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19th Jun 2018 12:58pm
Not sure if this is in reference to a wish or not ( as eyelashes are ), but it's how I interpreted it. And it's fabulously clever.
19th Jun 2018 12:59pm
19th Jun 2018 4:02pm
19th Jun 2018 6:39pm
20th Jun 2018 12:36pm
22nd Jun 2018 9:05pm
Hullo and welcome back
you're like a striker what can kick with both her feet. (world cup fever)
long or short bodes well
last line sticks out a little. possibly a flow impediment. perhaps if you switch the i to the last line it might close the seam ..so to speak
either way, good stuff 😎
*hat tip*
you're like a striker what can kick with both her feet. (world cup fever)
long or short bodes well
last line sticks out a little. possibly a flow impediment. perhaps if you switch the i to the last line it might close the seam ..so to speak
either way, good stuff 😎
*hat tip*
22nd Jun 2018 9:56pm
sharp eyed as always lep
i would never have seen that.
and shoot me if i ever dribble
i would never have seen that.
and shoot me if i ever dribble
