Can’t say These Words.

"Physically standing alone while Spiritually forged by the fire leading us in search of the Gateway to Wisdom.
Love this line!
James 3:17
"17 But the wisdom that comes from heaven is first of all pure; then peace-loving, considerate, submissive, full of mercy and good fruit, impartial and sincere.

age has its place in humanity, you talk about assertive patterns in human behavior, their smoke screens, this caffeinated aggression  and silky minimalism all destroy the life of the child,

there is a couple of nits, a comma after innocent,

I would never forgive, I would reset the button,

this is a good wright because of grammar, punctuation old school stuff  

Firstly, I love the message of this, Starjune. It's one of hope and love, and someone not becoming the monster they hate.  But, rather, ascending the human nature for bitter revenge through forgiveness.  Secondly, because you have requested honest critique, I would suggest the following:

Removed extraneous and repetitive words, reformat for a more poetic flow, space to enhance each individual thought; allow the reader time to digest before moving on.

Can’t say These Words. (title needs no end-stop)

I heard these words
in a song one day(,)
“Has given me an earthly home
with parents kind and dear”.

(space for emphasis)

How many of us can’t sing
or say these words in all honesty?
Too many...

Some children were abandoned,
abused physically, mentally, emotionally, sexually, (and so forth)

Even after the forgiving process
these words cannot be said
with sincerity of heart.

Forgiving does not mean forgetting
the wrongs done(;)
Sown from seeds of hatred
sprewed upon the innocent.

Forgiving leads to a passageway
allowing forward movement
without bitterness.

A softening of the heart
when one realizes(;)
(w)e can forgive
because they knew no better
than what they were taught.

Physically standing alone
Spiritually forged by fire
opens the Gateway to Wisdom.

This is offered in the spirit of your request for honest critique.  Please feel free to accept or disregard at will.

You're in good hands here, Starjune. 📝

Ahavati will never steer you wrong. ❤

Awww 💜

I was hoping you'd weigh in. 📝❤

Thank you. Long overdue the response, however, your suggestions are much appreciated.

Starjune, thanks for teaching me a new word - "sprewed".  All the dictionaries define it as "thrush". I'm not sure how that would apply to the poem, but "sprewed" sounds likes a combination of "spewed" and "spread". I certainly approve!  

Meant spewed. Thank you for commenting. Have a good day. I’m not on here often.

this you say is so true one can forgive but never forgets the wrongs don to them most important do the for give them selves on the wrong they imposed on the incent those that don't head to a burring hell

strong write thanks for shearing