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MY FAVORITE THINGS
I smile
contented, yearning
excitement growing
droplets of joy glistening
pondering my favorite things
The first glimpse of breasts
bursting from their fabric prison
cradled in my hands
ruby nipples poised for suckling
Naked embrace
sharing passion’s heat
fingers woven in herbal scented tresses
hot breath whispers in my ear
moist lips voraciously pressed
Reaching from behind
swaying to the beat
hands cupping alabaster globes
manhood riding between soft cheeks
kissing smooth, creamy shoulders
nape of the neck its silky down tickling
Bent over pink petals await
tongue taking sensual temperature
nostrils filled with heady, feminine fragrance
succulent lips travel up and down
urgent moans of ecstasy
handfuls of sheet hold back the flow
Delicious orbs dangle, within reach overhead
the divas seductive aria crescendo
planting deeper ever deeper
wet lips , tense muscles beg me never leave
pressure released in sweet convulsions
HEY YOU! DAY DREAM’IN FOOL...BACK TO WORK!
contented, yearning
excitement growing
droplets of joy glistening
pondering my favorite things
The first glimpse of breasts
bursting from their fabric prison
cradled in my hands
ruby nipples poised for suckling
Naked embrace
sharing passion’s heat
fingers woven in herbal scented tresses
hot breath whispers in my ear
moist lips voraciously pressed
Reaching from behind
swaying to the beat
hands cupping alabaster globes
manhood riding between soft cheeks
kissing smooth, creamy shoulders
nape of the neck its silky down tickling
Bent over pink petals await
tongue taking sensual temperature
nostrils filled with heady, feminine fragrance
succulent lips travel up and down
urgent moans of ecstasy
handfuls of sheet hold back the flow
Delicious orbs dangle, within reach overhead
the divas seductive aria crescendo
planting deeper ever deeper
wet lips , tense muscles beg me never leave
pressure released in sweet convulsions
HEY YOU! DAY DREAM’IN FOOL...BACK TO WORK!
Published 5th Jun 2018
| Edited 25th Feb 2022
Author's Note
Written at work...obviously 🙃😈😁
Image: internet stock photo rendered as a painting.
Image: internet stock photo rendered as a painting.
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5th Jun 2018 8:36pm
5th Jun 2018 9:41pm
5th Jun 2018 8:55pm
I started to comment on this, but never mind, I lost my train of thought.
5th Jun 2018 9:43pm
5th Jun 2018 11:17pm
O' yea, the poem. :-)))
Thought there was something I forgot.
Nice way to pass the time.
LIKED!
Thought there was something I forgot.
Nice way to pass the time.
LIKED!
5th Jun 2018 10:22pm
Hey Mr. Worship,
Inspired Erotic writing. You live up to your name. Kudos!
Working back to front, I know I know... I'm weird like that...
Your ending here is lovely, it feels so natural that daydreaming last line that there couldn't be a better ending for this write. I loved the change of font on it, gave it that classic work golfball typewriter feel from the 70's and that was a lovely smile. I'd like this poem twice metaphorically just for that.
The crescendo "pressure released in sweet convulsions" beautifully described in such a direct image. I felt rather spent by that stage.
I give extra kudos for a daydream that's sexy and sensual yet avoids the DU smut we're accustomed to in our everday reading. I was exstatic that you held in together and didn't need to be crude in the delivery.
I can only conclude, sir that you have painted a beautiful piece of erotic literature and while I'm not accustomed to these, I'm most grateful to you for laying it down.
Thank you
Blue Skies
Al
P.S. your image couldn't be a better choice.
Inspired Erotic writing. You live up to your name. Kudos!
Working back to front, I know I know... I'm weird like that...
Your ending here is lovely, it feels so natural that daydreaming last line that there couldn't be a better ending for this write. I loved the change of font on it, gave it that classic work golfball typewriter feel from the 70's and that was a lovely smile. I'd like this poem twice metaphorically just for that.
The crescendo "pressure released in sweet convulsions" beautifully described in such a direct image. I felt rather spent by that stage.
I give extra kudos for a daydream that's sexy and sensual yet avoids the DU smut we're accustomed to in our everday reading. I was exstatic that you held in together and didn't need to be crude in the delivery.
I can only conclude, sir that you have painted a beautiful piece of erotic literature and while I'm not accustomed to these, I'm most grateful to you for laying it down.
Thank you
Blue Skies
Al
P.S. your image couldn't be a better choice.
5th Jun 2018 11:34pm
Thank you very much Alistair! I am glad you appreciated the use of more sensual than crude language. My intent is to accentuate the beauty of the experience rather than the wham bam thank you ma'am approach. I wrote this during a reverie at my desk so I thought the ending appropriate even if it was a self-talk thing. You're awesome, cheers!
6th Jun 2018 8:46pm
I love the erotic detailing, which is delicious, then that killer punch line. Very much a turn on until that rude and funny final interruption. Me, I think you deserve a raise, Gahdess. Wonderful job!
6th Jun 2018 10:44pm
Thank you Sir Crow. Your words to any future employers ears in re: the raise. One can conjure some pretty perfect scenarios whilst day dreaming.
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26th Feb 2022 4:55am
I knew there had to be someone out there that shared this list 🤠 Thank you for the read and comment...I am pleased you like the piece.
26th Feb 2022 8:00pm
1st Mar 2022 1:55am
Amen, Pebbles! Thank you for the read and comment. I'm glad you enjoy the piece.
