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ChaiNed To The GaMe...
chained to the game
my bluest..
...truest of flames
as we walk
let no man or woman pull us apart
these thick links
be a symbol of our bond
yes
they heavy
even sometimes bothersome
take stock in the pleasure of knowing
your kept..
protected..
and loved..
8^/ dis be our LoverLane...
my bluest..
...truest of flames
as we walk
let no man or woman pull us apart
these thick links
be a symbol of our bond
yes
they heavy
even sometimes bothersome
take stock in the pleasure of knowing
your kept..
protected..
and loved..
8^/ dis be our LoverLane...
Published 17th Oct 2011
| Edited 19th Oct 2011
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Anonymous
18th Oct 2011 3:32pm
Mista Peppers, da bitches got NOOO chance when you slidin' it smooth an slippery like dis. Even I's believin' yo in love!
Joking aside, you're in danger of giving away the best kept secret in the world i.e. that happily wed is the only way to be. Whenever I write for my lady the poems are particularly well received, like they carry a good vibe or something. I think this one has that 'good vibe' thing going on . Herself acts like they embarrass her but I know she likes them. Still - no point spoiling her with too many, right?
Joking aside, you're in danger of giving away the best kept secret in the world i.e. that happily wed is the only way to be. Whenever I write for my lady the poems are particularly well received, like they carry a good vibe or something. I think this one has that 'good vibe' thing going on . Herself acts like they embarrass her but I know she likes them. Still - no point spoiling her with too many, right?
18th Oct 2011 4:31pm
yes.. mines spoiled rotten.. dont do it to urself.. may neva be able to write on anotha subject again without her feelin the competition.. women.. wat is a man to do?... smdh.. haha.. lmao.. but wat u say is true.. nothing trumps a happy marriage.. the math is God. Wife. then everything and everybody else.. strange and backwards when i first learned but has worked better than any otha plan my smartass eva came up with..
always... thank for QQn bro.. 8^/ Peppz..
always... thank for QQn bro.. 8^/ Peppz..
Anonymous
29th Nov 2011 9:13pm
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30th Nov 2011 3:57am
so true are ur words Sapphire.. i appreciate u reading and sharing ur thoughts.. 8^/ RED..
