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22nd May 2018 4:21pm
dearest Lobo your love
is the kind that kisses the Earth
making it come alive..
beautiful..
love Crim
is the kind that kisses the Earth
making it come alive..
beautiful..
love Crim
Anonymous
10th Jul 2018 6:05pm
i have always loved, and been jealous of, your skill with brevity. you so more in three little lines than some can say in three pages.
i wonder if the contraction is needed in the first line? i read that as a one syllable word, which makes the first line only 4 syllables. though, i guess it could be read as a two syllable contraction. which then negates that first comment! ha!
i wonder if the contraction is needed in the first line? i read that as a one syllable word, which makes the first line only 4 syllables. though, i guess it could be read as a two syllable contraction. which then negates that first comment! ha!
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