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I’ve got my sh!t together (with AndyJHale)
Plastic flowers never die such,
I heard some people say as much.
They sunbathe on my windowsill.
My plastic flowers, colorless
Are wilting from the sun’s distress
From sunbaths on the windowsill.
I’ve got my shit together.
I’d love to toss a chorus or refrain
Into the filthy mix, with salt to taste.
One at a time, six egg whites, stirred with haste
Then add a dollop of anchove paste.
Preheat the oven, set on high all day,
Then you will have a song on Hit Parade!
I’m on a steady diet of
Varieties of plastic fruit
That vanish on my way en route.
The noon day sun broke in my house
While playing with the cat & mouse.
Whoever knew or thought of that?
I’ve got my shit together.
I’m back! to toss a chorus or refrain
Into the icing for a marble cake.
Cream in the butter till a senseless heap
Then spread on top & sides two-fingers deep.
Turn up the ‘fridge and put the cake inside.
Next week you’ll have a Grammy by its side!
My demons run from sun straight up.
They’re stealing all of my sunshine,
But no one says that it’s a crime.
I’ve got my shit together.
Plain font is Andy,
Italicized font I think is me. ;)
Published 21st May 2018
| Edited 8th Jun 2018
Author's Note
Poor Andy - never saw it coming! Aw j/k... he’s my friend!
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21st May 2018 6:25pm
This was so much fun to read. Awesome job you two, together you put together a seamless work, you should be proud of.
Oh thank you, Layla, thank you so much! (((((hugs)))))
I had so much fun, and I’m glad it comes across - your comment is another reason that I’m celebrating!
I had so much fun, and I’m glad it comes across - your comment is another reason that I’m celebrating!
Jade was the seamstress sewing it all together. She's got her sh!t together.
21st May 2018 6:58pm
Ahh, thanks for the kudos, Andy... I also make a perfect
💁🏻♀️“Gulaș de cartofi cu afumătură”
💁🏻♀️“Gulaș de cartofi cu afumătură”
21st May 2018 7:08pm
Awesomeness!
I love how you two made this work... What a fun read.
RL coming...
I love how you two made this work... What a fun read.
RL coming...
Woweee, Tomcat, thank you so so much!
I’m so glad you got here just in time, to enjoy our crazy quilted rhyme!
And welcome home! Purrssss...
I’m so glad you got here just in time, to enjoy our crazy quilted rhyme!
And welcome home! Purrssss...
22nd May 2018 00:09am
Some of this reads like a recipe (intentionally, I'm sure) but it's a marvelous collab. You really got it together for this one, Jadey and Andy.
22nd May 2018 00:15am
Heheh, thank you my crowfly friend! Oh yes, 'tis I... I'm the culinary queen of mindfuck. And as so oft' times happens, you come through with your wonderful support & insightful observations. <3
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- Edited 22nd May 2018 10:34am
22nd May 2018 10:09am
Loved this!! Amazing job both of you! Jade as I’ve mentioned before your sharp wit never fails to make its presence known and is always enjoyed by me. Great job!!
22nd May 2018 10:55am
Why thank you, Ken! I’m terribly grateful & honored with how much you’ve always appreciated & enjoyed my - style? *chuckles @ herself*
Anonymous
22nd May 2018 1:37pm
Yes “style” is the exact word “You’ve got style” *chuckles back*
